interesting

Any hope of a sequel?

A good beginning, hopefully this will make a few stories!

Hopefully. Thanks for the review!

Looks like a kind of darkly funny story. A nice idea. Are you going to continue with Dawn's adventures or is this a one time get you thinking of what could be idea?

I read through your reviews (something I always do) I saw that one said that the Tok'ra don't keep you alive long with Cancer as shown with Jacob. That isn't precisely true. Jacob died because Selmak was dieing and did not separate from him in time because of the project they were working on. It was implied that if Jacob had been able to separate in time he would have continued to live a normal human life span. They had said before that Selmak had cured the cancer, of course, once she was gone I don't know if it would have reoccured. Thought that might help.

Thanks for your review. I recently just started watching SG-1 and I'm only up to early Season 8 but I did know that Jacob was gonna die. Just didn't know how but thanks for sharing. (and I don't mean that in a sarcastic sense, I really did mean thanks for sharing)

To answer your question, it really depends on whether inspiration hits but hopefully there will be a sequel in the future.

If she met Jacob then she knows the "snakeheads" don't change gender when they take over so why would she even ask about Glory? Just wondering. thx for sharing

When I was writing the story, I thought Dawn would ask if Glory was a Goa'uld because of the fact that Glory claimed she was a Hell-God. Thanks for the review.

So Dawn is still dying - a symbiote doesn't keep you alive all that long if you have cancer, as shown by Jacob Carter - and this story is marked as humour? Does not compute.

Sorry that I didn't make it clear that Dawn is still dying. I'll rewrite it to include that. I figured it would be looked at as kind of dark-sense of humor. If it's not that, then I'll change it. Thank you for your review and constructive crit. I appreciate it =)

Interesting start. I hope you decide to continue this!

Thanks. I may write a sequel in the future if the inspiration hits me but for now it's just a one-shot.

pretty interesting