Cool and creepy.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Jack Napier: Have you ever danced with
the devil in the pale moonlight?
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Nice!! I can't wait for the next part in the series!

I am glad that you got inspired to continue adding more chapters to this story.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

Thank you

Oh Goodie! a new chapter! I enjoyed this fic from the start and had thought it was abandoned. I'm glad to see it isn't, please update again soon.

I know you say you need a bata, but in reading I didn't see many if any spelling errors or run on sentences so I think your good to go.

Thanks. I haven't quite given up on this one yet and I'm glad that there wasn't too many obvious mistakes. I'm really bad at proof reading my own work.

Well, it is an interesting concept...you've been working on it for 2 years, though?

Sadly I don't have much time to write as much I would like to and even though most of stories are outlined I rarily stick to it.

I just re-read this fic this afternoon and I am wondering if you will ever continue it as its been about a year since your last update?

I love this idea for a fic and hope to see more soon.

I do plan to continue it as soon as I find some time to write. Unfortunately this story is one among many WIP that I need to finish. Thank you for the review.

I can hardly wait to see the circumstances of Willows defeat of Voldemort. Did he insult or threaten her?

Thank for the review and all will be revealed in next few chapters.

I hope you will find inspiration to continue this story soon as I and many with me is longing for more chapters to read.

Thank you for the review. I tend to write when the muse strike me and it takes me while to finish a chapter but I try to update soon.

Excellent, It doesn't have as many details as i would like, but i'm still enjoying it immensly. Please update soon.

Yeah I have to agree with you on that. It not turning out exactly the way I have envisioned it but I just liked the idea so much I had to put it down on paper. Thanks for the encouragement.

Nice. The work is starting to smooth out and flow a little better.

Its wonderful when both parties in a relationship are getting what they want out of it.

Thank you purrfus. The story idea is still a bit under development but I'm still working on the outline.

Is Luce trying to wiggle his way back in with Willow as payment or what?

Luce in by no means the good guy in this fic and all I can say is that he is using her.

No offense, but it looks like a bad copy and paste here. The chapter just sorta slams to a stop and it makes me wonder if you got bored and walked away from the project or if you forgot to copy it all into the input box before you submitted it.

You're right. I'll try to make the next chapter longer and more complete.

Come on, write more, it'll be fun.
:D :D :D

I think it's got some possibility for a further story. You've seen the type on TV and in the movies. You know, where the first scene is the epilogue or end of the story and then the main character(s) start going over the events that just happened (whatever it was that happened) and then sorta do a fadeout to the beginning of the story.....

Of course, if you don't personally think that the idea rates a whole book/epic-type thing, at least one more chapter/scene to tell us if it was something our willowy-Willow friend did by accident or on purpose.

I agree with you that at least another chapter is needed, but when I wrote this I wasn't sure if this would be the beginning, the middle or end of the story.