I love this story! Complete sense :D

Nice one! Lots of homages to the BtVS lyrics from OMWF, etc..

I noticed several typos, though the most obvious were "good news/ban news" (".../bad news" was intended, I assume), and the following from where Cordelia's talking about the survival of humanity: "...to survive, I must do so on..." ("I" was supposed to be "it"). Still, a fun read!

At five parts isn't about time that Cellmate becomes it's own story? The story seems to jump around a bit but that could just be my lack of knowledge about BSG. Very good chapter.

I wish you'd just separate the Xander/BSG ficlets into their own story. Those are best in your FFA.

Ooooooh, wonderful-ific. I can see Xander getting into the quotation biz after Sunnydale - he changed a lot over that last year in the 'Dale.

I can so see Xander in that situation. I recognize the quote from Oppenhiemer, but the other one escapes me. It's familiar but I can't place it.Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

The second quote is from Pulp Fiction.

LOL!

I love the little blue bastards.

I can't imagine what they'd do if they ever
ran into the Smurfs!

Nac mac Feegle wha hae! Are you implying that Angelus was Count Magpyr?

No; just consider it one of the many un-written stories in the multiverse...

I can see Chiana and Xander totally hitting it off (the next chapter), but I particularly wanted to compliment you on the idea of Faith and Illyria both terrorizing Atlantis.

Criticism first.
There are far too many spelling errors in these stories, which distract the reader from the content. Whilst I have a memory of you saying in a note to another story that you are dislexic, and can therefore sympathise with the difficulties you have, surely you could find someone to read over your work?

Compliments second.
I like these stories. Unusually, you've managed to make me enjoy a BSG story: Usually, I don't even glance at those since I don't like the genre, but these were funny. So - kudos to you for that. Many thanks.

I’ve had more beta readers than I can remember, and none of them have been able to keep up with me for very long.

I can write several thousand words on several different stories a day when my muse is playing nice. As such, I tend to keep my beta-readers for specific work: I have one beta who handles most of my Stargate fiction (but no Buffy Crossovers), another who does my original fiction for me, and one who deals with some of my more adult-orientated work.

Unless you think YOU can do the job...

Good selection. :)

you have to continu this one it's so in caracter and i loved it

Chiana does remind me more than a bit of Anya...she could definitely be good for Xander.

I think they’d be good for each other: Chiana could help Xander live again, and he could provide something akin to stability in her life. Add to that, he’s not exactly helpless in a fight...

Faith and Illyria? The Wraith won't know what hit them. I fear for the Atalantis residents.

As long as Faith can keep Illyria under control, Atlantis should be ok. The same couldn’t be said for the Wraith though...

Did think about hinting at a relationship between the two, but decided against it: friendship works so much better at times, Joe’s “We Love Lesbians!” mantra not withstanding.

The Prophetess Cordelia? Oooh, you *are* evil! :D

Yep...