Review of chapter "Super Bowl Sunday at Hogwarts" from
zafaranReview:
More, more, more, please. Pretty please. This is delightful, and I was *so* glad I wasn't drinking something when the scene about the Addams came through. Well done. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Super Bowl Sunday at Hogwarts" from
silvergaurdReview:
oh i really like this fic hope to see more!
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silvergaurd] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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cjcoldReview:
Nice little chapter.
You know if Xander and crew are around long enough maybe he can help the Weasely twins by investing in their business startup.
Really intersted in seeing where Xander's ideas and the things he is introducing to the wizarding world will go.
Like the direction his research project are going.
Will his new business use Hogwarts duirng the summer vacation. It could help make a bit more money for the school. They could probably use some new equipment in a few areas. Or maybe he will have made enough to buy some property in Hogsmeade for the business.
Have always thought Hogwarts could use more staff, or at least teaching assistants for the Professors.
The Addams Family introduction was interesting, is that idea going somewhere.
More soon please.
Comments from author:
The Addams might just provide background color and a reason for their being so few North American wizards. But I haven't decided.
While Xander will achieve Business Idea Greatness (much to his own convenience), he will to his dismay still have major 'Xander' moments.
And at some point, there will be more about how so few teachers can get so much done w/o being Dumbledore's age already.
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cjcold] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Super Bowl Sunday at Hogwarts" from
djhardimReview:
Good to see more of this.
Review By [
djhardim] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
very good
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Bobboky] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An In-Flamel-tory Talk with Two Dumbledores" from
BobbokyReview:
excellent ideas in this chapter
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Bobboky] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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BluesnowmanReview:
Good stuff.
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Bluesnowman] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Immortal in King Xander’s Court" from
BillReview:
GREAT Part!
Review By [
Bill] • Date [28 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Immortal in King Xander’s Court" from
APSReview:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [
APS] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Immortal in King Xander’s Court" from
BobbokyReview:
good
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Bobboky] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Immortal in King Xander’s Court" from
BluesnowmanReview:
Great work. I love your stories are you ever going to continue Death Moves To Sunnydale and the great Last Action Xander?
Comments from author:
I'm trying...sigh...but just to get writing again, I'm following wherever my poor mind carries me...
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Visit to Narnia in 1993" from
BillReview:
So very well done!
Review By [
Bill] • Date [15 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Visit to Narnia in 1993" from
InfinixReview:
Very nicely done chapters. I am always glad to see more of any of your fics but this is definitely one of my favorites. The only thing holding back the story is not the story itself but trying to read while it's being written and having to remember where the last chapter left off. However once it's finished this will be a truly excellent read.
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Infinix] • Date [15 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Visit to Narnia in 1993" from
cjcoldReview:
Nice chapters.
Xander seems to be learning to cope with the workload. Can't wait to see what he does with Alchemy.
Glad to see that people are enjoying his little movie nights, wonder what if any impact it will have on people in the coming years. Maybe an increase in Technomancy
Harry really needs to learn to stop sweating what others think of him, he can't control what people think so why bother. Be more concerned about possible actions they might take. It would have been nice to have him know a bit about how to handle a sword given future events.
Curious the Malfoys invite him over for dinner. Wonder what they are plotting?
Like the idea of taking Conner to Narnia, wonder why they aren't taking Brenda along though. Still won't to see Conners reaction when he finds out about the Pholosphers stone effects and that Brenda doesn't have die while he keeps on going.
A little bit more on how Faith and Dawn are doing in the magic learning would be nice. What are their specialties. Did Dawn pick up anything on the animagus transformation from Halloween?
More soon please.
Review By [
cjcold] • Date [14 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
cool
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [14 Oct 07] • Not Rated