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MariReview:
Adding this last little bit "Yeah, you’re going to have a pop quiz tomorrow in History. G-d thought you guys could all do with a warning." was an excellent idea--making the ending just a little lighter, and contrasting nicely with the grimness that was most of the chapter.
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Mari] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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MrMiklosReview:
This is a great story and I like where it's going...I have only one question. Near the end of the story there is a line that says 'Willow will even have to put a spell on people to prevent legilimency from being performed.'
What is legilimency? I tried a dictionary and couldn't even find it. Could you tell me what this word means?
Thank you
Comments from author:
That was a hint towards one of the later crossovers--Harry Potter. Ligilimency (sp?) is the wizarding world's type of mind reading. In this story, that's how The First is going to try to read people's minds (or rather, his minions---death eaters) will try to read the scoobies.
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MrMiklos] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
wonderful!
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jupitarsdaughter] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
UniilaDellaLunaReview:
love your story, can't wait to see what you have cooked up for the gang. guessing Buffy ends up a SGC at some point? be kind cool of i'm right, keep up the good writing
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UniilaDellaLuna] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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PATMReview:
Is G-d the God that we're reading here? Great first chapter too. Keep going please
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PATM] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
CPTSkipReview:
I loved the relationship you are showing us between Buffy and Dawn. I also like it that both The Big Guy and Tara have forgiven Willow. I look forward to more of your story.
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CPTSkip] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
TheBearReview:
That was really good--as in enjoyable and heartwarming. This series is quite enjoyable.
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TheBear] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
exiledReview:
Good story! Thanks
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exiled] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
CPTSkipReview:
I liked your story. You did a nice job with Joan. I'm glad to see others still remember that very neat TV show. I look forward to reading more of your series.
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CPTSkip] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
zephyrRSReview:
Interesting! I've never seen Joan of Arcadia, but I look forward to more of her appearances. Perhaps she should even transfer schools!
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zephyrRS] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
MistofRainbowsReview:
Interesting story, though in some ways it should almost be a chapter along with 22 minutes. As for mixing god in with Buffy verse, you did a better job than a number of people I've read.
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MistofRainbows] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
