Poor Buffy. This is a good story. Please keep it going.

I like the story, but you REALLY need to watch your word choices:

vain vs vein
indict vs indicate
Power's vs Powers
torturous vs tortuous

updates are great. this story is greater. yay for stories and updates!

I'm guessing Buffy's "death" has to do with a sarcophagus...

Very intriguing series so far, looking forward to more.

How can you disappear from an entity like the First?

You shall see, you shall see. *grin*

Maybe it's not so much a matter of disappearing, but rather, hiding in plain sight. Maybe if they're spotted alone, weak, The First will be unable to perceive the strength of the threat.

awesome!

Thanks. = ]

I really am enjoying this story(the whole series actually)it is very well written and very entertaining but i am confused at the end of the chapter dawn is thinking about Buffy dying i thought in the 2ND story of this series it was stated that Buffy's going to live to spoil all of dawn's future children so which part is true? Please keep up the great work

Hmmm. How could that be? Don't worry--the answer will make sense, don't worry 'bout it.

Thanks for reading. = ]

Yea that adds more depth it totally rocks now

It will be clarified in a couple of chapters, actually. I was trying to work with that foreshadowing thing. *nods*

Thanks for all your help, though. = ] You rock.

I'm completely hooked on this series.

I like this series. It's pretty good. But uhh... I got a little confused near the end of the chapter. Dawn was talking to wesley about how he had to stay and then all of the sudden joan was just like 'what she wants me to move'. It's a little confusing. You might want to look at that and see if you left a part out and if you didn't you should probably smooth it over so it makes more sense. But other than that I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what happens next and what the other two battles are.

I edited that part of the story--I hope it makes more sense now.

Thanks for reading. = ]