I really like this so far, vamp Xander is always good to read. I would like to see more nathaniel please...

This Chapter was bloody awesome! I really hope that whoever the person was that wants Xander as a pet never succeeds at all whether capturing him, killing him, breaking him or torturing him or any other plans they may have, and that Xander always wins any fighting that may come. I also hope that Xander comes out victorious in his match with Death. I cant wait for the next parts to come out!! Keep 'em coming! You rock!


Please update soon!!! ^_^

Please write more soon!!!

*Reaching Xander-puppy-eyes levels of cuteness*

I can have more? No? Yes?

WOW!! THERE ARE NO GOOD GUYS IN THIS STORY! There are only bad and worse. Anita is screwed up, Xander is a psycho, and both Jean-Claud and Asher like it! This is definitely darker than I usually like my fics. Can't wait to read more!

that was interesting!

This was an AMAZING installment! I am SO very glad you're updating this story again! I absolutely adore your evil!Xander - the way you write other's ractions to him is perfectly breathtaking. I can't wait to read more!

Hurrray another chapter! I love this story. Oh boy. The vampires are going to have to save Edward and Peter from Xander. That's going to suck. Unless you let Xander kill them .... that might be fun too.

Awesomeness! Oh, I can't WAIT to see what happens to Edward! It'd be so cool if Xander literally ripped his head off. People don't do that a lot anymore. I mean, some do, but they don't really describe it in a cool way, but you make things wonderful! Lots of talent at your fingertips. ^_^ I love evil Xander. He's so fun! Oh! It'd be a real thrill if Xander turned Peter on a whim. I wonder what kind of a soulless monster Peter would make. ^_^ Please update soon. I can't possibly wait. This series is just that incredible! I'll be on the look out. ^_~

WHoohoo! a new chapter, great story, positively delicious,
I oh so love vamp!Xander so sinuously evil.
Hmmm Xander
*squeals with joy* Absolutely love it.

Yay new chapter. Can't wait to see more soon!

This is great, Xander is so bad and i just love it. I love that you've updated. I hope that you update soon.

I love how deliciously evil Vamp!Xander is here. It's interesting how you have the 'monsters' around him starting to revel in their natures [in spite of their better judgment at first] and how you have them starting to slip heir 'human' fronts. It's almost as if Xander being in this world is allowing some of the taint from his world through and it's starting to infect the supernatural world in Anita-land.

Interesting...hoping for more.

So glad you updated I was becoming a might bit concerned =^.^=