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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from zafaran
Review:
Very nicely done beginning for what should be an interesting story. Is there any chance of getting more chapters anytime soon? Even with a soul, Dru should still be a seer since it was her gift that brought her to Angelus's attention so that he drove her crazy before he turned her. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from WolfWriter
Review:
Nice, very nice.

Only one teeeeeeeeny little bitty complaint.

Ya haven't updated in nearly a year.

Is it writer's block or that horror known as REAL LIFE?

Either way, you're forgiven. I'm going to track this story, so's I can read more nummy chapters as they come out.

Peace y'all!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from willayork
Review:
oh, oh what next what next?
hehe, i like the idea that dru can't remember most of her life when she was alive, adn i really don't think it's impossible that she'd be about the same age as albus, maybe a bit older, but i've never really thought that she was that much older than spike.
and, yeah, i know there's some episode of angel with a flash-back but i dont know the date and anyway, angelus could've spent a year or two driving her crazy and killing everybody, right? i think albus'd prbly have to be a bit younger than her but,... well i think it could work.
im hoping there are still more chapters coming of this, it's quite ... enthralling. lol
Review By [willayork] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mercifulblack
Review:
Loved this. Will you write more?
Review By [mercifulblack] • Date [18 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Eureka
Review:
more plz???
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Lemons
Review:
You're doing wonderful-please continue!
Review By [Lemons] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Lemons
Review:
You're doing wonderful-please continue!
Review By [Lemons] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RoseFyre
Review:
Actually, Drusilla and Albus are just about the same age - in Buffyverse canon, she was sired around 1860, and she was probably somewhere between 18 and 25 or so. Dumbledore's born around 1840, and you can certainly fudge the dates five years in either direction if you want.

Lovely fic so far!
Review By [RoseFyre] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mithrilandtj
Review:
COOL!!!!

I love this story! It's fun!!!

How'd Dru get ensouled anyway?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [30 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Before you wake" from DarkTopaz
Review:
update I can't wait to see how Harry reacts to a motherly Drusilla
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Before you wake" from FairyQilan
Review:
Cool. But what will Dumbles say?
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Before you wake" from Sadfru
Review:
still confusing but enjoyable :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cutiepie
Review:
Why did the stars stop singing? Do the stars only sing to insane vampires *without* souls? Their ceasing to sing certainly didn't restore Dru's sanity, nor is it a sign that she is no longer a clairvoyant. So, why did they stop, and why did Miss Edith stop talking to Dru as well?

Or was the no more singing/Miss Edith thing a result of Dru crossing to the HP universe? In other words, did whatever it is/was that talked to Dru as Miss Edith get left behind, and do the stars not sing in Harry's world? Hopefully you will clear this up for me in future chapters. I shall read, just to be sure you do. =] Oh, and because I think that this could be lots of fun, too. :smirk:
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (2007%20Donor)vinniebatman
Review:
This is a hilarious premise. I kinda want her to hook up with Snape, or at least molest/harrass him.
Great job, and I hope to read more.

One quick note about quotation marks. If they are being used inside of a quote, then the should be singles, ie
"I didn't believe Miss Edith, but she said to me 'You can't go home again.'"
Also, since Miss isn't an abbreviated title, no need for a period.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for clearing that up. I'll edit it as soon as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.
Review By [(2007%20Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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