i love this can't wait for more!!!

i just found your story and i'm loving it.
really hoping you'll be updating very very soon. please write much more chapters.
i really want to know how this story goes.
you can't possibly think that you can start your story halfway, drag it back to its beginning and then leave it hanging.
you simply must write more...please please please have mercy on your readers ( i know i sound pathetic but i'm really curious about this pairing)

I'm really hoping that you continue with this story. There really aren't enough Buffy/Lucius stories out there, and I think that he could be such an interesting guy.

I like that you've set the story back to when he was younger, since it gives you so many choices in regards to his personality. I mean, is he a semi-decent man at this time, but then losing her makes him become colder and crueller to the world, because the glimpse of him that you see in the present day seems to indicate that he cares for her a lot. Of course, he was very angry with her when he thought that she might be a muggle, so she’s got her work cut out for her if she wants to make him see some sense over the pure-blood superiority idea.

Please keep on writing this, I love what you’ve written so far, and it’s such a unique story to read.

i love this story, i am not a paring snob. i read just about anything with Buffy paired with a male type person. as long as it is well written, and this is...

Please add another chapter soon, I am really curious to see where it goes. Pretty please!!!

*giggle* No, that's the current slayer's job =) Interesting pairing, will we be seeing more Lucius soon? He better get his act together.

Oh I love this and I greatly want more, you are amazing and this is so much fun to read. I also find the pairing highly interesting to read and can't wait to see what you do next, I'm looking forward to whatever you com up next.

I love your story and especially the pairing. There are too few of Buffy & Lucius pairing.
Can't to see their meeting again .... and also in the future ... I think it will be more complicated.
And will be more complicated if you make Draco as Buffy's son ..... ^_^

Great Chapter! Please continue soon. How is Buffy supposed to have fun during such a time of darkness? Also, if Buffy wasn't some sort of magically inclined person, why didn't she freak when she saw the house elf in Lucius's place? Lucius must have realized that later perhaps? I request more Lucius and Buffy in the next chapter. Thanks! Happy Holidays!

So Cute, I love how Sirius is taking to Buffy. I wonder who the masked man is?

Personally I love this pairing, and am so very glad to see someone writing it. There just isn't enough. Not to be repetitive, but I felt that her attraction was a little rushed, but it didn't detract enough to throw me off. Waiting eagerly for updates.

Thank you! (I love this pairing :)

Stupid man! She should have kicked his ass. Buffy does have "bleedin tragic taste in men." Look forward to more.

Well I'm not normally to much in favor of the Buffy/death eater pairings, but I can be won over on occasion. Strangely enough, Malfoy isn't acting all dark and what not... Isn't that kinda out of character?

I really hope I’ll win you over, the more the merrier.
You are right, Lucius is out of character but he’s only 23 years old. I’m going to explore the circumstances that made him the person he’s now and see if he can be redeemed. Oh…well is an alternate universe fiction, OC’s are a must.
Thank you for the review.

LOL i'm loving the Sirius talk, so good.... I also love the Lucius and Buffy goodness. Cant wait to read what happens next.

Your story keeps me hanging on for more, keep up the great work

Thank you!

Hi, Ok, I love Lucius and Buffy together. I found a few grammar things but they may just be me. My suggestion is to either get someone to proof read and make suggested changes or consider writing the chapter than reading it out loud to ensure all your sentences make sense. Overall, though, I am really enjoying reading it. Buffy and Lucius were really cute together but I can already see that we are looking at a Somewhere in Time situation. Also, I get the impression from the first few chapters that Buffy was in the past for a while. Does that mean that she is Draco's Mom? I look forward to your next update. Also, I loved, LOVED, loved the scene between Buffy and Lucius at Gringotts. Trust Xander teasing Buffy to give off the wrong impression to Lucius. However, wouldn't Buffy recognize Lucius in the past from having seen him in the future?

Thank you for your comments, I just got a beta reader, she’s revising and fixing this story for me. I really hope you like the rest of the story.