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Review of chapter "Having Faith" from Kristal
Review:
OMG! I've finally finished it! Horray! And HEY! You killed Sirius (again)! I was hoping for a Faith and Sirius relationship after her initial he's cute thing. Aw, damn nabbit! Though hey, Malfoy's dead, that's a new twist that will indeed change things in the future. Speaking of ships, will there be any? Love the story, love the angst, and love a new update soon to come! Continue ASAP! WRITE NOW!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad that you are still enjoying the story despite the demise of Sirius. I have to say, deciding to kill him off was not easy. It was very hard to come to the decision that he was worth more to the story dead then alive. As for ships, there will be the cannon ones (Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny) plus at least one new one that I'm not ready to give away the details yet. Not to mention there will be flashbacks of past relationships that had happened before they time traveled. Even the romance will be dark and angsty....I'm so cruel to the characters. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Crowe
Review By [Kristal] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from anyanka
Review:
This is by far my favorite story on this site. You've taken Ron and Faith and played with their depth and complexity. Amazing work. I cannot wait to see your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you much for the kind words. I really wanted Ron and Faith to be displayed as multi-dimensional characters. I love both of them and wanted to create something where they were not just a cliche of themselves.
Review By [anyanka] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from kiyo
Review:
i was dying for your next update and it didn't dissapoint. this is a great story your writing and i want to say congrats
Review By [kiyo] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from Oranda
Review:
Yeah! More Faith. I really like her character in this story. Can't wait for your next installment, please post soon.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from MariaLucas
Review:
Good chapter. I can't wait for more.
Review By [MariaLucas] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from blackmirror
Review:
Great again. The Lara Croft parts still have me in stitches, although I am a bit disappointed that Sirius couldn't be revived. i was half hoping that that was what the chapter title referred to ... And powerful writing there in the end, in the scene with Harry and Ron. I normally can't stand Ron, but you have really made him grow on me.
Comments from author:
Killing Sirius was a very difficult decision, but I told myself when I first starting writing the story that I was not going to hold back because I like the character. I'm glad that Ron has grown on you. I've found that there are quite a few people who dislike him. So, when I started writing, I made sure to not make him a cliche of what other authors have done. Thanks for the review!
Review By [blackmirror] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from arkeus
Review:
Awesome.

Just...Awesome.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Having Faith" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
I had kind of hoped that Sirius would be saved, but after all the build up about saving him, it was a bold move to not save him. Definitely a common theme in time travel stories is the immutability of some events. Anyway, now you've got to deal with all Harry's emotional fall-out, but I think you're up to it.

Nice little tidbit about DD and the slayer in WWII. It's canon from AtS that the Germans used (or at least tried to use) Vampires during the war. It might be a nice little side story there.

Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Even though I was writing the chapter, I was also kind of hoping that Sirius would be saved. But I told myself when I started the story that I wouldn't hold back, and sadly, Sirius was worth more to the story dead then alive. I'm glad you like the bits about WWII. I've been thinking about writing some side stories/one shots, and your right that one would fit nicely into the world. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far and thanks for the review.

Crowe
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from blackmirror
Review:
Brilliant story so far. It is original and very well written. I just cursed when that avada kedavra came out of nowhere. On the good side, that means you sucked me into your world with your writing. On the bad side -since Sirius is one of my favourite HP characters- I just really really hope that you are going to find some smart way to revive him. Especially because I am holding out high hopes for him and Faith to fall in luuuurve.
Review By [blackmirror] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from Skyefather
Review:
just found this story. started tracking it so please update soonest can't wait. it would be nice if you could save Sirius but if not what has to be has to be. if death has you on his list he's going to get you one way or the other. as they say "the Jackal god cannot play favorites" so maybe Sirius dieing is what has to happen to draw Tommy-boy out so Dumbledore can keep him in the open long enough for that idiot Fudge to see him and accept the Truth.so great story thought for a while you might get Padfoot out but great job so far.

*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [Skyefather] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from Noclaf
Review:
there was nothing you could do to save Serious? Really? are you sure? maby chuck baby or a puppy in front of him? or a hapless order member? or mayby if you throw a dead body through the Veil, ti will come back to life?...I now have a plot bunny....hmm...
Comments from author:
Ha. . . . .if you ever write that plot bunny, I will probably read it. . . . .

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Noclaf] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from SpinelessPunster
Review:
Holy holy Suspense! Excellent.

I'd forgotten this story, sad to say, and, as I've been ill for the last year, my memories been bad, but this story stuck, so I crawled out of my hole to review.

Excellent characterization and description. Loove this kind of fic. Moremoremore!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you found your way back to the fic. Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long as this one (it shouldn't but you never know what might come up).

Thanks for the review!
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from nicowa
Review:
Oh wow, you have no idea how much I hate you now! I love this story, love it so much, the tone and flow of it is superb. But to save Sirius in one way only to kill him in another? Should have known you'd do that...

Still love this story, can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I thought of saving Sirius, but decided that he added so much more to the story dead. . . poor guy, he can't catch a break.
Review By [nicowa] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from (2007%20Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
nooooo *wails and whimpers* I was hoping he would be saved!

Good chappie!
Review By [(2007%20Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ruining Properties of Prophecies" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Damn it all to hell!!!!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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