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California Dreaming

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Review of chapter "Need a Lift?" from musiclover
Review:
you do the slight suttering thing good
Review By [musiclover] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Need a Lift?" from Aaronlisa
Review:
Nicely done. I like how you intertwined the two worlds.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I've been toying with continuing this story, but haven't quite formalized where I want it to go. I'm thinking of at least doing a part where they are still on the road to California from Dean's point of view. Or even derailing Tara from ending up in Sunnydale... Who knows...
Review By [Aaronlisa] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Need a Lift?" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Things that warm my heart, this has been added to the list. I liked the fact that you let us 'see' Dean's emotions but kept him cool/calm for Tara. The casual use of her stutter was a nice throw back to when we first met her in season 4 and didn't feel forced at all. Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
I was concerned on how much stutter she should have. But the 20 minutes thing didn't leave me much time to ponder it which probably helped in the long run.

I have the nagging urge to follow up on this one and I may do it someday...
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Need a Lift?" from (2007%20Donor)vinniebatman
Review:
This story really tugged at me. I could easily see an AU where Tara is resurrected or leaves Sunnydale and ends up with Dean. You played it well, showing how she pulled at Dean's softer side.
Comments from author:
Hmmm... The Softer Side of Dean. *snicker*

Glad that you enjoyed the story and that my 20 minutes captured your attention. The plot bunnies are bouncing around demanding a full length fic, so it may happen...

Thanks for the review!
Review By [(2007%20Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Need a Lift?" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Oh how perfect! I love this little missing scene for both series :) Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Review love makes me happy! I'm all about answering those nagging questions about the things that were missing in the respective fandom. Glad you enjoyed!
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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