Review of chapter "Cops and procedures" from
wildcardReview:
Yay! A new chapter! I absolutely love this fic, but was beginning to think it had been abandoned. Now I can't wait to see what Yknot has planned for the family, and what they do about it! And what's burying these kids alive?
Comments from author:
I NEVER abandon a fic. It just occasionally gets stuck or pushed to a back burner for a while. Ok, it's been a LONG while! lol But it has been a really stressful year and lately its only getting worse. With any luck most of the s(*&^&**%%t (insert your favorite here) should be done with by the end of the year. *looks up* Please???????
Yknot is a real jerk. He hides in the shadows and barely gives me any information at all! Big meenie! *sigh* What else should I expect from a nasty demon? lol
It's a ghost. The fun part comes in figuring out why.
Review By [
wildcard] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cops and procedures" from
LadyFoxFireReview:
That has to be the one of the worst ways to go.
Comments from author:
I agree! That's just nasty.
Review By [
LadyFoxFire] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cops and procedures" from
RhyssiaReview:
Long time no see! Niiice yupdate. Also, the spawn in head thing.
Also, I hope Andy's lawyer eats IA for breakfast.
Comments from author:
RL sucks big time. I've had a year full of nothing but stress. :(
*shudder* I can't help it. *points at muse* It's all her fault! lol She's the one that said demon pathogens and other assorted nasties.
Oh yeah. Shark's grin and please continue? I'd say that she's eager for a meal. *snicker*
Review By [
Rhyssia] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Progress" from
KirallieReview:
Great series!! How long till the Council works out that demon is the one the WInchesters are after too? Love the mental image of dean with the pram. Not to mention the trip to Disney. Could have been worse, they could have gone to Disney World!
Comments from author:
Xander already knows. The person that came to him with the information was the one he had set to tracking the Winchester's demon. I just need to kick the muse into gear on this story so he can tell John.
Dean makes such a good dad, but the trip to Disney was not his idea of fun! lol Actually the incident with the toddler and Donald Duck actually happened at Disney World. My in laws took my family and at the time I had a two and a half year old and an eighteen month old. Donald tried to walk off with my baby. I was NOT amused! I was told later that I looked like I was about to tear the costume's head right off. *shrug* What can I say, I'm a protective mom.
Review By [
Kirallie] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Progress" from
AnskuReview:
Good two chapters, I'm looking forward to the rest :)
Comments from author:
As it comes from the muse, I bring it straight here. I promise! *Holds up fingers in boy scout oath*
Review By [
Ansku] • Date [24 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Progress" from
TarnishedGoldReview:
Glad to see this one back, I've missed it.
Gold
Comments from author:
Well, I just write as the muse dictates. I'd finish it in a heartbeat if I could.
Review By [
TarnishedGold] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finals Week" from
toscaReview:
Dean's DisneylandHell! LOL!
Great chapter. :-)
Comments from author:
yeah, it turned out to be not so bad after all. He did get to skip It's a Small World After All! Thanks!
Review By [
tosca] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finals Week" from
TanydwrReview:
Excellent series of stories. I love the public aspect of it.
Oh, and Disney's ghost was a wonderful touch.
Is Dean gonna get some love? I mean there's both Paige and Phoebe who seems close to, plus Dr Jensen (and I've got to believe that's a reference to the lovely Jensen Ackles)...
Keep up the great work.
Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
Thank you. I still can't believe that a simple one shot has turned into this long and rambling series.
I remember reading that Walt Disney was a workaholic and there were several funny stories about it in a book my grandmother owns. The one I remember most clearly was the night his wife fell asleep after being told that they would go home at ten from his studio at the park. When he woke her up to take her home he told her it was ten when it was really something like two in the morning! That sort of dedication to his work plus the sense of humor that you can still see throughout everything that he had a hand in meant that I had to have him still hanging around.
Alas, Dean is being very stubborn. He's got no problems with flirting but every time I want to put some serious dating in, he runs off. He tells me that he has his hands full with his family right now and can't handle anything more. I do want him to get together with Phoebe but, I have to wait for them to cooperate! And yes, that was where I got the name from, hehe.
I'm trying. If I could just get the muse to steer a little straighter! LOL
Review By [
Tanydwr] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of Disneyland" from
TakarameriReview:
I'm glad your plot bunny decided to cooperate again! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Me too. I know it was bored with the whole Disneyland thing, but they were still stuck there until I could get them through the last bit. I also wanted to get something from Yknot's POV. I needed to answer some of the basic questions of why it was going after the Winchesters in the first place.
Review By [
Takarameri] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of Disneyland" from
AnskuReview:
Nice one :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. This one really stalled on me for a while. But at least I've finally gotten them out of Disneyland and I can get back to the story. At least I hope so!
Review By [
Ansku] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adventures in Toontown" from
AnskuReview:
Nice one :) I'm looking forward to the warlock's plans :)
Comments from author:
This one took forever to get out, mostly because I'm working right now. But I'm glad that you liked it.
Review By [
Ansku] • Date [16 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Frontierland and Fantasyland" from
kcjadesoloReview:
totally cool, can't wait for the next chapter. hope that you update really soon.
Comments from author:
Well, it's going to take a bit. I'm working full time for the next week and that means that I don't have time to do the research this part of the story takes. I need to be at my computer looking at the Disneyland map so I know where they are and where they're going. That being said, I know that they are going to run into Donald Duck in the next chapter and Donald isn't going to like it. Or rather, the person in Donald's costume is going to regret making a mistake in front of them. ;)
Review By [
kcjadesolo] • Date [23 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Frontierland and Fantasyland" from
AnskuReview:
Adorable :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm a little sugared out right now, so I'm working on other stuff to counter. When I've got my levels down I'll be back. ;)
Review By [
Ansku] • Date [30 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Frontierland and Fantasyland" from
PaganRaimiReview:
I have completely fallen in love with this series!!! You write so well, the characters are well developed and fun and I can't wait for the next chapter. Little Mary and Johnny are so sweet. I love watching Dean be daddy. Having Sam be sad for losing a mom was so bittersweet. The incorporation of the Scoobies and the Halliwells has been fun and exciting. Keep up this fabulous story I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm a mom and babies that age really are sweet. They are just ready to explore the world and it really shows. I'm glad that you think things are balancing well. I don't want to go too overboard with one character and not enough with the others.
Review By [
PaganRaimi] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adventureland Part Two: Thrill Rides" from
gbholdernessReview:
Gosh you Rock! I mean seriously you know you're my hero right? You write these amazing and complex stories involving dozens of characters and you can keep more then one going at a time. Definite Hero material. I can't wait to read more.
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Comments from author:
I'm also writing a book. Not bragging, just saying where my free time goes! If I'm not reading then I'm writing. Ever since I was a little girl when they asked me what my talents were I'd say reading and writing. Now I know why God gave me those talents. And now I do know that they are talents. I had a terrible person almost destroy them. If it wasn't for my reviewers and their encouragement, I never would have gotten past my first chapter of my first story. So right back atcha girl!
Review By [
gbholderness] • Date [6 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]