Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ElleriaReview:
Very good.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
purrfusReview:
Interesting glimpse into the maybe. While its a little difficult to say who's fault the problems really were, based on the bits we get to overhear, it is so Xander to have relationship problems: straight or gay.
Usually a typo here or there doesn't bother me; unfortunately, in this case the one typo I saw was in the pivotal sentence. At the end when Xander is committing on who they were looking for. Other then that it was fun to read.
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
WiseReview:
Bad. Very, very bad.
You cannot simply assign names to people in a breakup scene and expect it to work as a fanfic. Even if he were involved in a gay relationship, this is not how Xander would act. Ditto for Draco.
Comments from author:
sorry you think so...but it's my drabble...there are other stories that have them both out of character.
Review By [
Wise] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
JessReview:
Oh, *heart breaking.... tearing up* this was good... I'm going to go try to cheer myself up now.
Comments from author:
thanks..glad you liked it.
Review By [
Jess] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
