Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
HoytReview:
disregard the below text UNLESS you want a large dose of incompatible plotbunny
Halo.
Fill the galaxy with ancient constructs, like dead cities and drifting remnants of ancient weapons.
add The Flood, a parasite that can take anything of sufficient bioass as a host to become part of its 'collective'. They would wreak havoc on a fleet and provide good reading.
But no Master Chief
just the UNSC (United Nations Space Corp)
Review By [
Hoyt] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
CeriesReview:
this story is bloody amazing. :)
when are you doing the next?
Comments from author:
As soon as I finish The Sleeper Awakens (I'm trying to cut down on the number of stories I'm working on at one time), but I've started prep-work.
Working title is "And The Devil Shall Drag You Under", take from a song in the musical Guys & Dolls.
Review By [
Ceries] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
CdogReview:
I can not wait to see what's going on in the sequel. Is Tara a PTB? Is Tara a Cylon? Or is she something else. Well you can't bet your ass I'll be tuned in to the same bat channel at the same bat time.
Comments from author:
If I told you, I'd have to kill you.
Truthfully, I've not decided just what Tara is yet, or even if it is Tara. I guess only time will tell.
Review By [
Cdog] • Date [27 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from
MorithilReview:
Nice story, easy to read and follow, especially for those of us who don't follow the show all that much.
As for the metal stake, been done before in an old B&W Vamp movie from the 30's (Think it was one of Bella Lu's first flicks). Vamp didn't dust, just went dormant until it was removed. Nice twist
If you need another beta ...
Review By [
Morithil] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
HawklanReview:
tx for this nice story, i hope to read more you soon
Review By [
Hawklan] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
RevDorothyLReview:
Very much looking forward to the sequel. I need to know how this is gong to turn out.
Review By [
RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
ElleriaReview:
Sequel up soon please!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
CPTSkipReview:
I just finished reread your whole story and let me just say, Your Fracking Cliffhanger is a Mother Fracker! Lol! Tara? Hummm. I look forward to the next installment of your story. I thought your story only got better as it went along and I am very impressed with the way you handle all the characters. And to think, this is all the fault of Cordy. Lol! Good work, but I need more!
Comments from author:
I hate to tell you this, but I do have a thing for cliffhangers...
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
silvergaurdReview:
i really like the fic hope to see more soon!
Review By [
silvergaurd] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
APSReview:
My thought about the fic as a whole.
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [
APS] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
mithrilandtjReview:
Damn, What was Tara doing there?
Comments from author:
You know, you're actually the first person to pick up on that. I was expecting a bigger response when I decided on her instead of Cordelia (as I originally intended), but it seems to have passed most people by.
As for what's she's doing there, well you'll just have to wait and see...
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
WisprReview:
Really enjoying your story... can't wait for more!
Wispr
Review By [
Wispr] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from
morgyairReview:
OK I'm adding to the list of things I don't like....I don't like stories that end on a cliffhanger....on the other hand you do talk about a longer sequel with LONGER chapters...wooohooo! Please don't make the suspense last long.....
Comments from author:
Unfortunately for you, I just LOVE writing cliffhangers...
Review By [
morgyair] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from
morgyairReview:
OK I just want longer chapters and failing that faster updates....by the way red herrings can be fun
Comments from author:
Sent the last chapter to Baladen just after I posted this one.
Review By [
morgyair] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from
GodotReview:
Very interesting. Bringing in a Time Lord, eh?
Review By [
Godot] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
