Review of chapter "Crash & Burn" from
DragonelfReview:
I bet that she surprised Vader quite a bit.
::Gives the plot bunny some Black Forest cake with extra chocolate::
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Life is a great big canvas,
and you should throw all
the paint on it you can.
- Danny Kaye
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crash & Burn" from
CoralskipperReview:
I want to tell you that I love this story. It's the main reason I check the Star Wars section of the site, actually. The interaction between Leia and Vader has been spot on. The dramatic irony has been used perfectly to heighten the tension to the inevitable, and when it happened it was done in a brilliant way. In all honesty, my only complaint is that there isn't another chapter up right now.
Review By [
Coralskipper] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crash & Burn" from
KeshkreatureReview:
Oh wow. Just read the whole thing, and you had to stop THERE?!? It's really good, I really like it, now could you please tell us how Vader's going to react to THAT one?
Review By [
Keshkreature] • Date [14 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crash & Burn" from
grdReview:
Incredible chapter! All of Naboo it seems is hell bent on rescuing Leia. I love it! Wonder if Vader/Anakin will put two and two together.
Review By [
grd] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crash & Burn" from
TonyTheJewReview:
You are a evil author with you cliffhanger..... So up-date soon
Review By [
TonyTheJew] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Force" from
MamaLadyWolfReview:
*pouts a little* Poor Jar jar oh well it was a good death. I can't wait to read more of the story. Thanks for posting
Review By [
MamaLadyWolf] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Force" from
CoralskipperReview:
Another good twist. Having Jar Jar killed over Leia was a very nice touch.
Review By [
Coralskipper] • Date [26 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Force" from
DragonelfReview:
Yay, new chapter.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
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What if nothing exists and we're
all in somebody's dream?
- Woody Allen
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [26 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The word of a dark lord" from
DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
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Don't anthropomorphize
computers -- they hate it.
- Anonymous
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The word of a dark lord" from
mekaReview:
Your story is so good. I love it!!!! Please keep going.
meks
Review By [
meka] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Obsession" from
CoralskipperReview:
Man I love this story. I like hearing the perspective of Padme's family on the situation.
Review By [
Coralskipper] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Obsession" from
EricThorsenReview:
I love how someone can have most of the evidence and then jump to a completely incorrect conclusion because they don't have one key piece of data that renders everything clear. Case in point. Vader has all of the data except that Padme was carrying fraternal twins. This results in many mistakes. Also, his focus on Leia causes him to fail in recognizing Sola Naberrie Janren, his own sister-in-law. Sad.
Review By [
EricThorsen] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Obsession" from
DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot stew::
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The best way to predict the
future is to invent it.
- Alan Kay
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Obsession" from
TonyTheJewReview:
Looks great so far, Up-date soon
Review By [
TonyTheJew] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Obsession" from
rothosReview:
Good, Very Good. Darth Writer's Block seems to not be troubling you. When will Vader realize that Luke and Leia are his children or is it going to take all of ROTJ for that?
Review By [
rothos] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
