I say Buffy/Angel!!!!
Luke and Lorelei
Rory/Dean or Rory/Jess
Fred and Wes
Willow/Tara
Xander/Anya

I think you should go woth lorelie & spike and buffy & angel...

Generally I don't like BA stories, because I always thought that Angel became a whine-y broody jerk, but this has the potential to be very interesting, as long as good things happen for Spike as well. I love Spike, and Spuffy. Don't have Dawn/Spike though because that just gives me the heebie-jeebies. I would really like to see how and where this goes, and while I agree that you could use a beta, I think that you are doing a fine job. After all, you are actually writing and posting which is more than I do. More soon please!!

I like it.

Interesting take on this storyline... I will have to reserve the rating until you bring the GG part in. Keep up the good work.

Okay... IMHO there are some problems with your first(?) chapter.

1. The language looks like you are trying way too hard. You are writing fan fiction, not the Bible or Shakespeare.

2. You pack things/ideas too closely together. You need to space things out more.

3. You don't explain the whole resurrection thing at all well... Angel's tears are the LAST thing to complete the resurrection? What was the first? Who started it? And When?

4. Your punctuation needs help. Commas in the wrong palce or not enough or run-on sentences.

5. You have a lot of details that seem to be just for "color" and have no bearing on the story itself.

6. Your author notes are distracting.

You need a beta... badly. One who understands story telling/continuity/plot.

Oh well... at least you seem to know how to spell...