Review of chapter "Make A Wish" from
KristalReview:
Confused... but i liked the first chappie... short but would like to read more with that. The first story I read like this hasn't been updated for years on end so I have to find a new one :P
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Kristal] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Death of The Key" from
WolfladyReview:
Too much disconnect between the two. The only thing the two seem to have in common is Dawn being Harry's sister. I like the idea though.
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Wolflady] • Date [28 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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LinReview:
Ok, the first chapter i can find believable if a little rushed...but the second chapter just made too large of a jump there.
Review By [
Lin] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Death of The Key" from
PsyckosamaReview:
Two small text blocks a two chapter story doth not make.
Comments from author:
eh?
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Psyckosama] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Death of The Key" from
WolfkinReview:
This chapter makes no sense, especially as it relates to the first one. Why is Dawn fighting demons? Why is Harry just standing there not helping? Please expand and explain.
Comments from author:
Don't worry! It will next chapter! ^_^
Review By [
Wolfkin] • Date [26 Sep 07] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make A Wish" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Interesting. I can't wait til you get the time for this.
I think the idea of Dawn as related to Harry is wonderful. I know for a fact (Well no not really lol, just an assumption) he'd never ignore her or not include her. And Harry needs siblings.
Comments from author:
thanks! i always thought that if there was another world that Dawn was apart of, or if she was related to har ry in HP she would be his twin, since the two look so much alike.
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PrincessTai] • Date [26 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make A Wish" from
MirrorMirrorReview:
Why do you stinking authors have to put up a great start to a story and never finish it? Write Dawn being in the HP world. It would be freaking awesome. PLEASE?
Comments from author:
There are plenty with Dawn being thrown into Hp world. Alas, I have 2 stories that I am working on and thus cannot work on a third because then it would be too much, however if you would like, I give you permission to use this chapter as a starter for one of you're own stories.
Review By [
MirrorMirror] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Make A Wish" from
NicCuinnReview:
Awww! This is WAY too short! What a great beginning for a story!!
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NicCuinn] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Make A Wish" from
CutiepieReview:
Things can go terribly wrong, but you aren't going to tell us about them? And of course the Scoobies won't miss her, since she will have been completely removed from their existence by the wish. Except maybe Anya would know the difference.
Comments from author:
lol, I put that last sentance there because I wanted to leave it open in case I happen to find time to write a full langth story. anyway, thanks for reviewing. Its always appriciated.
Review By [
Cutiepie] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
