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JediKnightReview:
Good job on the story so far, although chapter 8 needed dialog; I hope you'll add more soon.
When will Sam and Buffy meet? You seem to be procrastinating.
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JediKnight] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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meganReview:
I was just wondering are you going to be updating anytime soon or will it be another year before you update?
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megan] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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AvaReview:
Oh wow. Just wow. This chapter was a fantastic character study and I simply love that Faith is interwoven into Buffy's life like that. They could have used each other during season 7 of BtVS and its nice that you built on the glimmer of hope we got in the last few episodes. *patiently waits for more*
Comments from author:
I love you. Did I mention I love you? *hugs* Thank you for the support and patience.
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Ava] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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saturnssailorReview:
AWESOME story. I hope you update it soon. I can't wait to find out how Buffy and Sam react to each other.
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saturnssailor] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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FritolaysReview:
I loved the chapter. Especially all of Faith's thoughts on Buffy and everyone else. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. New chapter is coming, its just a little slow going. *sigh* If I can just make it through this current chapter and then they'll be in Colorado and all the real fun can begin. LOL
Happy you liked the Faith chapter. I got a lot of really mixed reviews about that one.
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Fritolays] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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ConstanceTruggleReview:
Thank you. Thank you so much for not making Faith a total douchebag. There is so much more to her character that Joss left unexplored. I look forward to more of this story. The overall story is excellent. You miss or add a few minor words here and there, but then, don't we all? I hope Buffy and Faith and Spike (whom we STILL haven't seen, only heard of) kick Riley's ass when they find out who outed them -again- to the military. Keep up the great work.
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CT
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ConstanceTruggle] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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meganReview:
I was just wondering how far along you are for the next chapter and if you know when it will be out?
Comments from author:
I have four seperate parts to the chapter. Yeah, it's one of those. LOL
Not too sure when it will be out. My main beta and idea bouncer kind of bounced away and its a little difficult writting when I don't have anyone that I can talk out the story too. I seem to do better when I can rant and rave to some one; sadly, people appear to have lives. I need one. Eventually.
Ummm...release date for the next chapter...hopefully soon, but I don't want to give out a time frame. Promise it won't be as long in coming as the last chapter was. It's just giving me problems.
Sorry. *ducks and hides*
Review By [
megan] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AmaiReview:
Okay, I was following the story perfectly until the last chapter. I think I got most of it, but Faiths POV is a little convoluted. Which makes a certain amount of sense for the character. I like the way your tying in all the StarGate people rather than just the one link. It's mildly implausible, but should make for an interesting confrontation later. I can't wait for Oz to appear, and I am really really really hoping that Faith gets a crack at Sam. Really really.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that chapter took on a little life of its own, but opened up for the next chapter so it's all good. I have a lot of little subplots and story lines working up so I am setting everything up now. I dropped a couple of important hints for whats to come later in the last chapter too. Muh-hahahahahaah
And it is mildly implausible, but when you have aliens and the PTB, well, I figured I could work around with stuff a bit. LOL. Oz will be coming in soon and he'll even get his own little story to cover all the stuff for him that I can't in this story just because I like him and Faith will most certainly get a crack at Sam. Heheheheheheh
Happy you liked and thanks for reviewing!!!
Review By [
Amai] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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BillGopherReview:
Very nice update. Faith-centric or not, this update was well worth it. Here's to hoping Faith can protect Buffy and herself from that Slayer Dream she had :)
Please update soon, I've really really enjoyed reading this story so far!
Review By [
BillGopher] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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soulfuloneReview:
don't stop!!! hurry back soon, please, this was really interesting!
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soulfulone] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from
FrogsareevilReview:
good chapter! i hope an update is not in the far distant future.
Review By [
Frogsareevil] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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JewelReview:
Great! Keep it coming.
Comments from author:
:D
Review By [
Jewel] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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NoLifeKingReview:
I like this chapter. :-)
Faith's thoughts, feeling and history are very interesting to read in such a way.
I look forward for more of this.
Comments from author:
Thankie!!
Happy you liked it, I was a little worried since it didn't start off being a wholey Faith-centric chapter. :)
More be coming soon.
Review By [
NoLifeKing] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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malexandriaReview:
Really good story, love the all the Faithy goodness. My only minor complaint is I hope you don't turn this into a Scooby bashing story. Other than that, really good and can't wait to see where you take this and to see the confrontation between Sam and the Good Scoobies.
Comments from author:
It won't be a Scooby bashing story; promise. The whole thing behind this is redemption and mending old wounds. Of which there be a ton between Buffy and the Scoobs, and since I like Buffy the best and think she suffered the most, I so totally side with her. Xander and Willow will be coming in and Giles will be in there more, you'll start seeing things from their perspective and some of the reasoning behind their actions and reactions as well as...a whole bunch of stuff.
Crap. This is going to be a fricking monster when I get done with it. *quakes in fear*
LOL
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malexandria] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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becuzitswrongReview:
I really enjoyed hearing things from Faith's point of view. I'm really glad to see more of this story. I look forward to seeing where you end up going with it.
Comments from author:
*hugs*
It really didn't start out as a Faith-centric chapter but she totally stole it. :)
Review By [
becuzitswrong] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]