Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
DuskieReview:
That was to say the least original and unusual.
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Duskie] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
neverwillReview:
And hey, he could show her the fun of torturing evil demons and they could bond even more! I mean muggles can't last through too much torture, but a really evil demon could entertain her for DAYS.
Review By [
neverwill] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
TabeeReview:
This is actually a rather cute story... a nice romance between Xander and Bellatrix.. who would have thought?
I can't wait for future parts and see everyone's reactions!
On the consturctive criticism part: You may want to run a quick spell check and/or get a beta. There were a few parts where words were skipped so it took a bit to figure out what was going on.
Otherwise, a nice story :)
Review By [
Tabee] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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SusanAnthonyReview:
Only Xander could be asked out on a date by Bellatrix LaStrange and regard said date as the only normal one he'd ever had. I hope you plan further dates.
Review By [
SusanAnthony] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Not Rated
