I like it, tho it is a bit curious that Spike was OK in direct sunlight when they were in their own universe.

I"m glad you enjoyed it, but every sun has a slightly different composition. There's no evidence about WHAT in the sun makes them go 'poof' but I imagine not all stars would have it.

This is fantastic. Very enjoyable, well written, good characterizations, blah, blah, I wonder sometimes if I'm this good. Doubt it.

Great job - looking forward to the next in the series!

'lynn

I Loved the Drama and the humor of your Story But I would like to see pairings if you continue and make it a series. KEEP WRITING!!!

This was a very good story. I really enjoyed the character interactions. The personalities were spot on.

I read this ages ago and am surprised that I never reviewed. I reread the whole thing and enjoyed it just as much the second time. It's an easy read, it flows real smooth.
I also like the uniqueness of the characters interaction, it was a different combination. You balanced them well.

Great story! It's nice to read one that somebody's actually finished for a change! I like the concepts you've developed here. Good characterization too.

Hey! I've only just found this story - and I have to tell you...I LOVE it! Thank you so much for writing and uploading it!

What a very satisfying conclusion to this very enjoyable story! I particularly liked the bit where Spike was the only one who could de-code Oma Desala's poetic utterances, and I'm delighted with the potential for this mutual protection treaty.

Any chance of a sequel? Please, please?

Hihi wedgies...

Thanks for the update and finishing this great story!

Excellent story. I read the first chapter on your web site months ago, then got caught up in Real Life. What a pleasure to get back to fandom and find this as a finished story. Jack's voice was especially good, but they were all great. Lovely hints of Spander, too. I like the way you've caught them at the beginning of friendship, with Spike still pretending to help for his own mercenary reasons, despite the fact that he's loyal to them, and I love Xander's loyalty in return. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Lovely. Perfect mix of humour, action and friendship. I appreciated that this was not a 'shipped story. I look forward to the next story in the series. :-)

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, but I do warn you that it will go shippy when I write a sequel.

Sorta missed seeing Janet go bonkers, but the last few chapters have been so much fun to read.

Great story. The interaction between the two groups was fun to watch. It even came as a surprise that they are indeed from the same world/dimension. Spike's ability to annoy Jack as well as Xander was well done. I really had fun reading this story.

Thanks for sharing.

I'm really hoping there's a sequel somewhere...

It was great! My favorite part were when Jack refered to Janet as Napoleon! Can't wait for the next story to begin!