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Review of chapter "Part 4" from gothgirl
Review:
More more more! This is super dee duper good so far and you MUST finish it! Don't be a lame author who never finishes anything!
Comments from author:
:) I'm really glad you liked it.
Review By [gothgirl] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Joyful
Review:
While I am enjoying this story immensely, I've noticed a couple errors. For one, non-wizards wouldn't be able to apparate, but if they're part of the council, they'd be able to teleport. Also, you mention that they're on the platform, and then you have Harry still in Surrey. Lee wouldn't necessarily be able to be there either. The Weasley's would have sent the remaining kids off to Hogwarts, and then gone looking for Ginny. By the time they found the body, the kids would all be safely at Hogwarts, which is where the kids would be freaking out. Probably right after Dumbledore would send them all home.


Or maybe I misread, and they weren't at King's Cross, but it seemed that way. I like all the rest of the story, and I'm going to keep reading.
Comments from author:
Nope you read it correctly and if there are mistakes I'm sorry. I'm not exactly sure how I'd fix the location thing, but as for the apparating thing I'm assuming that the council would send members that knew how to keep up the ruse that it was death eaters who took her. Thank you for the review.
Review By [Joyful] • Date [15 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4" from Eureka
Review:
So when are you going to write more?? This is a good fanfic and I loved reading it.
Comments from author:
Soon, I hope. I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4" from Wolfkin
Review:
This needs to be updated and soon. The suspense is beginning to get annoying.
Comments from author:
Sorry you're annoyed, glad you like the story so far. I'm hoping to have it updated by the end of the week.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [19 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4" from Clandestine
Review:
It's a really interesting story. I hope you continue it!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I hope so too. The fifth chapter is a bit tricky, but it's coming along nicely. :)
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [13 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4" from TorturedAngel
Review:
nooooooooooooo...bad cliffy!!! more now!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :D
Comments from author:
Sorry the cliffhanger upset you, but glad you liked it. Working on the next part and hopefully it'll be up soon.
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [6 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 4" from Twoboots
Review:
About time you updated this! I love it! Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Twoboots
Review:
Okay. I need more again!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Working on it.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Dreamweaver
Review:
I suppose that Bill and everyone else is just too stunned to realized what his actions meant. I had thought of that clock thing. From what I understand of how it works, if Ginny'd actually been killed, her name-hand on the clock should've fallen off or something. Instead, when Bill had yanked it off the family clock, it'd only been pointed at "mortal peril". I wonder if or when that might occur to anyone that Bill had yanked it off instead of the clock arm turning black or coming off.
Comments from author:
Yes, they were too shocked with grief and disbelief and I needed her hand off the clock or they for sure would have found her once they saw her hand move many times, hence Bill's actions. Wanted her to meet up with the Scobby gang first. Thank you for noticing, that part of the scene was very vivid to me.
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Chaseherchiss
Review:
This story has really caught my attention!

HP/Buffy crossovers are some of my favorite and you are doing a wonderful just thus far. You have a very descriptive nature and the continuity of your story really flows well!

I look forward to reading more of this wonderful story as you have time to post it.

Chase
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it so far.
Review By [Chaseherchiss] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from Twoboots
Review:
Keep going. I think it's quite good. I can imagine this happening to other Slayers whose families weren't open to having their child taken from them and trained. I'm excited to see where you are going with this!
Comments from author:
Thanks. :) I have to agree, I'm sure Ginny wasn't the only one that the Council stole.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [6 Feb 07] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Twoboots
Review:
Wasn't to sure about this in the beginning, but once I figured out what was going on, you had me begging for an update! Good job! Give us more!
Comments from author:
Sorry it was confusing. I went over it again and hopefully its less confusing now. Thanks.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [31 Jan 07] • Rating [2 out of 10]
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