The thought of them putting a GPS on Dawn made me LOL!!!
I also like the Xander/Jo interaction. You should totally make them a couple! :)
I'd like to read more from this one, as well as Dawn with the boys! :)

I hope the answer is no. A gun in what could be a fairly public place should be a no-no. It could attract attention.

*giggles* Gods, Andrew is such an idiot!!!! I liked this chapter though and can't wait for the next one!

You've actually made Jo fairly likeable for me, which is a good achievement whilst not being too OOC. I also like the direction this is taking and am wondering if you're going to include the Winchester Boys in this at any point (Just a personal preference, no big). Your characterisation of Andrew and Giles was excellent.

Really enjoyed this quick look at international watchers council's interaction with Jo, Ellen and the Winchester brothers. Would love to see more on Dawn's travels with the brothers. Great start to the series!

I really, really enjoyed this story. You have the nuances of all of the characters down so well. Usually, even in the best fics, characterization comes across primarily in dialogue, but you've gotten each of the characters spot on in their mannerisms and physical presence as well. The entire fic is well-plotted and well-paced, down to the final line, which was the perfect place to end. You even wrote the entrance scene well. The devil is so often in the details, and you've clearly mastered those. Bravo!

Nice. You should continue with this idea. It would be interesting to see Jo working with the Council.