Review of chapter "Broken Glass" from
DeanieReview:
Nice start. I love the way Dawn lectured Sam, and Willow's hesitant explanation. Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, there are two more pieces and I'm still working on it. RL has just gotten so busy so my writing time is pretty limited now.
Bu there will be more.
~Alice~
Review By [
Deanie] • Date [26 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
PyroDeScorpioReview:
so i really loved this one. The bent knife had me laughing: same with sam having to go to another planet to get laid... hehe... Newho, I liked it, and i don't read slash a lot so that s a compliment and a half!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you gave the slash a chance and enjoyed it.
Also, thanks so much for the feedback on it.
There will be more, I promise.
Review By [
PyroDeScorpio] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
CallmemasterKentReview:
LOVE IT!!!!!!
Cellphone thing was hilarious!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you got a kick out of it.
I could just picture John looking at his phone and doing a spit take.
Thanks so much for the feedback.
@lice
Review By [
CallmemasterKent] • Date [16 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trembling Before God" from
musicloverReview:
your doing good two left bud
Comments from author:
Yep, two to go!
I've had fun with this series, even though that last one nearly killed my brain.
Thanks for the FB,
@lice
Review By [
musiclover] • Date [21 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trembling Before God" from
ziliReview:
i liked it, actually i like them all. cant wait for the rest.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I'm glad to hear (well, read it). I was nervous about it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks!
@lice
Review By [
zili] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trembling Before God" from
PrincessTaiReview:
lmao!
Oh now that was too funny.
Especially the Aphrodite hitting Dean. It is his luck to piss off a goddess :-D
>>Your, uh, Holiness.
Only Sammy ... and the Princess Di comment? *giggles and rolls eyes*
Why am I not suprised.
And you had Johnny in it too!
Yay! :-)
Comments from author:
Well how does one address a Goddess? Your Grace/, my lady? I have no idea, so I don't know if he would either. I'm so glad that you liked it! Thanks so much, I was nervous about it.
@lice
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
PrincessTaiReview:
>>"Had to go to another planet just to get laid, eh Sammy?" Clark blushed again.
FROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!
Oh you just keep gettin funnier and funnier don't you?
The Dawn chapter was good but this was effin' hilarious!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I knew that Dean would have to make a joke about it. And it was fun to have Chloe getting upset and just telling the truth.
Thanks so much, your reviewingness rocks.
@lice
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [8 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
TorturedAngelReview:
cute as well but funny too
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it enough to review.
Thanks for the FB
@lice
Review By [
TorturedAngel] • Date [17 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Glass" from
TorturedAngelReview:
cuteeee!
Comments from author:
Yeah, Dawn's been kidnapped enough that a little cut doesn't bother her. She's too busy being pissed off.
Glad you enjoyed both chapters.
Thanks for the FB
@lice
Review By [
TorturedAngel] • Date [17 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
KiwikatipoReview:
Very good idea. Who next I wonder?
Comments from author:
I have made the selections. The next one isn't as well known, a kind of minor character, but the world the character exists in is pretty far removed from the Winchesters.
I have all the rest planned out *cackles in glee*
Good times.
Thanks for the FB.
@lice
Review By [
Kiwikatipo] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
JennyLalReview:
Loved it. Very funny. That's some picture to receive!
Comments from author:
Yeah, now I can't help but wonder what John's reaction would be: spit take? Yelling? Laughing himself silly?
Glad you liked it and thanks so much for the FB.
@lice
Review By [
JennyLal] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
periskyyeReview:
These are so awesome! I like seeing the slice of "what could be" - either one of these could easily be turned into a fully story.
Comments from author:
True, but the Clark story would be more interesting, seeing how the farm boy reacts to Sam hitting on him. Either way, glad you enjoyed them. Thanks so much for the FB.
@lice
Review By [
periskyye] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
amusewithaviewReview:
Oh god, that bit with the camera phone almost made me choke. That's such a normal thing to do, and you made it Supernatural!
Heh heh: 'Super'natural 'Super'man... LOL
Thanks for sharing! This was priceless good fun.
Danke
Comments from author:
Yeah, with the first one with Dawn, the initial meeting was pretty brief because both groups know the Supernatural world. I make the one with Clark longer because their worlds are so different and strange. A knife? Fifty dollars. A baseball bat? Twenty dollars. A picture of your family's nemisis encased in ice? Priceless.
Thanks so much for the FB
@lice
Review By [
amusewithaview] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire and Ice" from
NezziReview:
I really love this, you've got a great handle on all the characters and your style is so entertaining. I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for the FB.
@lice
Review By [
Nezzi] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Glass" from
dharkcharlotteReview:
THAT was cool.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
@lice
Review By [
dharkcharlotte] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Not Rated
