Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from
mokahiReview:
I've enjoyed your story thus far and look forward to reading more.
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mokahi] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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TerapsinaReview:
Please say that the next chapter will be soon because I love your story but i don't think that I will able to wait match longer without starting to be scary!
Sirella.
P.S. I give you 10/10
P.S. 2 This is my sister's Terapsina account.
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Terapsina] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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BunneyReview:
okay this needs even more!! I mean you left us hanging!!! That is straight up sabotage! get back here :)
Later and Love
Bunney
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Bunney] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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DeanandBuffyForeverReview:
Please update! This is a very good story. I can't wait for Dawn and Draco smoochies.
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DeanandBuffyForever] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KiayraZiveriReview:
OMG!!! This is a really great story. It is written fantastically and draws me into it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. There are not many times when I am angry at the Trio but I like the way you wrote their behavior, there are times when I wanted to slap all three of them for their comments about the Slytherins. Overall, this is one of my favorite stories.
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KiayraZiveri] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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FrogsareevilReview:
Loved it! loved it! loved it and update soon!
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Frogsareevil] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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AngelcakeReview:
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so awesome! want more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Angelcake] • Date [2 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from
TamoraCardboardMoonReview:
I'm really loving this story so far... but I desperately hope that Harry and the others get what's coming to them, or at least start feeling seriously guilty. Especially after that outburst Dawn had when Ethan mentioned her mother... they've gotta realize that something is up that really upset her. But I keep expecting them not to trust the rest of the Scoobies either... after all, Buffy is the sister of a Slytherin now.
By the way, this is Dana from the Angel episode "Damage"
http://www.whedon.info/article.php3?id_article=16471&img=angel-season-5-episode-11-damage-on-the-set-mq-03.jpg
I loved that episode. Horrifying and heartbreaking. :(
Update soon - PLEEEEEEEEEEASE!
Ta,
~Tamora, the Cardboard Moon
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TamoraCardboardMoon] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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MistressTitaniaReview:
Very Intersting, I'm extremly intriuged with how you are portryaling the "golden trio", I wonder if Harry will ever snap out of it and realize these people are the good guys who could keep him breathing, hmmm, wonder if someone put some magic on the grif rooms and that's why that call forgot all the friendship over the previous years...hmm...like I said I'm very intriuged with this fic and look foward to more and more and more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you are intrigued and not turned off (I know there is a fine line between the two when it comes to how I am portraying the trio). I have the next chapter outlined, but am finding it hard to write for some reason. I hope to update soon. Thank you so much for the review!
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MistressTitania] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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spkReview:
WOW! I just discovered this story and I freaking love it!! I love the way that you're writing the HP characters and how seamlessly you are intertwining their lives with the lives of the Sunnydalers. There were just too many wonderful things to mention them all, but I do have to say that I loved the scene with Ethan, the showdowns between the Trio & the "09ers/Sunnydalers", and the Muggle Studies class. Great job creating tension and mysteries with the Hellmouth and the different interactions between the groups. I can't wait to see what you do with this. This is one of the best HP/Buffy crossovers I've read. Amazing job! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad the groups are flowing together. I'm always scared sometimes situations might seemed forced, but I'm really happy so far they haven't come across that way. And I just LOVE discovering new stories that I really like. It's one of my favorite things. Especially when they are still being updated (I'm always sad when I discover an abandoned story, especially when I think it's a good one). But have no fear! This story is not abandoned. I've seriously spent way too much time with it to abandon it. Work has just been extremely hectic, but maybe I will be able to write this weekend (I hope so). Anywho, I'm so glad you like Ethan, I love him! I totally plan on having him pop in from time to time, just because he's fun. I didn't actually plan on having him in the story originally, but then I was re-watching Buffy episodes and I saw "Band Candy" and I remembered how much I wished he would have continued to pop up throughout the rest of the series. Okay, I think I've rambled on too long, so I will stop soon. I just wanted to say thank you! For the review and for the very kind and encouraging words. Thanks!
Review By [
spk] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ajayeReview:
I love the ensemble-in-the-making. Please continue; waiting for an update!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I hope to update sometime soon. Life decided to get busy very quickly. But there will be more, I can promise that. Thanks so much for the comment!
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ajaye] • Date [23 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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WolfbladeReview:
Found this story tonight and read it all through at once and really enjoyed it. Okay, the golden trio are very OTT but it's a fun take on them and they can certainly be more than a bit narrow minded at the best of times! Enjoyed the fact that you have lots of ensemble characters popping in and out and that there's a lot going on, even though Dawn is the pivot. Can't stand her in the show but like her in several fics and I like your take on her. Hope you write some more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you like the ensemble characters. I love ensemble television shows, movies, books... so I really wanted to make this story have a rather large ensemble. I do worry at times that it may be too many, but I love all of the ensemble characters. I do understand not liking Dawn in the show. She grew on me, but I couldn't stand her for about a season when she first came onto the show (she as too bratty for me). But I think the show gave her some ground to grow up, and this is my take on how I believe she could have progressed if given the time. As for the Trio... Yeah, I know. I do realize I have them a bit OOC, but this is from a very different perspective from the books. In the books ALL Slytherins are evil and all Gryffindors are good (that's always seemed a bit implausible to me). So I decided to turn the tables a bit. I'm very happy that change in perspective didn't stop you from enjoying this story. Thank you so much for the lovely review. I do hope to have more written soon, life has just decided to get extremely busy for me. Thanks again!
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Wolfblade] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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mandacReview:
yeah i get where your coming from, and wouldn't have said anything if you would have mentioned that Dawn new where the name really came from. (i'm not trying to sound mean, sorry if it came off that way.) kinda like how you had her do the mind talking to Spike saying how it was good they didn't know about the name change to Spike. because sometimes you don't know if the author knows the real story or just made something up because they didn't pay attention or something. but i can live with it knowing that you changed it for the plot and not because you didn't know :)
Comments from author:
No, no. Didn't come off mean at all. I'm always glad that someone enjoys the story enough to point out errors I have made. If you see any others please let me know. I know I will be changing some things here and there, but I don't believe it will be any of the Buffy or Harry Potter history. I actually think I may add something along the lines of the whole, "she knew, but didn't want the class to know." I don't want people to think I'm making things up (I try really hard to research as much as I am able to find so that I can be as true to each story as possible). Thank you again for all of your feedback. It has been extremely helpful!
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mandac] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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mandacReview:
love this so far, its very well written. but one thing bugged me. the part about William the Bloody, you said "She met William the Bloody, who’s nickname was given to him because of how horribly he tortured his victims." but he had the nickname William the Bloody BEFORE he was turned because of "his bloody awful poetry" it had nothing to do with torturing victims. but i still love it so far, that part just kinda bugged me though.
Comments from author:
You are correct. I actually had to reread that part of the story (I didn't think I would make that mistake), but I did and didn't. Here's my reasoning for having her say it the way she did. She was telling the class about William the Bloody. There really wouldn't be a record about Spike before he was turned. How could she have known about William the Bloody referencing his bad poetry (in the eyes of the students). While Dawn does know about the poetry thing, she wouldn't say it to the class, so she would use the most obvious meaning for his name. I don't think I'm explaining it as well as I am wanting to. I can totally see where it would be confusing (I should have added a "she knew it was because of his poetry, but the class couldn't know that," or something). I'm really glad that misunderstanding hasn't stopped you from liking the story. Thank you so much for the feedback.
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mandac] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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SamJamesReview:
Harry potter crossovers are overdone, but you've found a new way of doing it from the Slytheran perspective with Harry and the Golden Trio being, if not the bad guys, than judgmental and irritating. Good work and I hope you don't abandon this.
Comments from author:
They definitely are overdone, but I love them anyway. I'm really glad you like this one. I like different perspectives, it makes me happy that other people do too. I totally wont abandon this, just may take some time to update. Thanks so much for your feedback!
Review By [
SamJames] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Not Rated