How did you create something so hot and funny and sad all at once? (I guess technically the first chapter was funny and the second was sad, but I read them both just now.) Really enjoyed it.

How? I'm not sure, but I think it has to do with my muse being unwilling to write pure PWP. She always tosses in a bit of plot to even out the smut. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for taking the time to review.

Please more?!?!?!?! I am dying for the Danny for that 'verse to join in, maybe Cam as well?

I'll beg and plead just say the word. Really really.

No, no Cam at least not in this 'verse. Buffy and Vala are Danny's girls though that is an uber hot foursome. *ponders*

You know I *heart* the Buffy/Vala, and love the Buffy/Vala/Daniel, even if only in memory. Beautiful, sexy, and ever so sad. Thank goodness at least Buffy and Vala have each other in this new dimension. And I'm sure our girls can work their magic on this Daniel as well. :D

Here's to hoping this Daniel isn't a prude like mini!Jack. ;)

Though I'm thinking the threesome will happen in present time eventually...just not yet. I think our girls need to heal a little first before they attempt to seduce anyone. Thank you for the review love!

Ah... smut. Gotta love it!

The 50 smutlets challenge is one of my favorites. ;)

I'd really love to see this fleshed out into full fledged story. The pairng rocks!

EDITED REVIEW. Original review date: 2008-01-30.

Thanks for the nice review of my first story! :) I don't think I'd ever reviewed one of yours before, so I picked one that sounded interesting...

*reads story*

...And HOW! :) I should have taken warning from the series this was part of... :) Do you think maybe this story should have a "Borderline PWP" in the summary too? Hawt! :) I clarified that with "borderline" because there was plot in this story, and the situation is definitely interesting in and of itself amidst all the... distracting bits. :)

Found some tyops and other issues that I think need addressing. It's always a good idea to make any fixes in your original word processor doc first, but especially here when there are smartquote characters involved. Your original bits alternated with my suggested fixes and comments. Private review, of course. :)

[list of corrections removed; review made public]

ETA: Thanks for making the fixes. Looking forward to when you continue this. :)

*** Ponder

Glad you liked it and sorry it took so long to get back to you, but I wanted to make the corrections to the original file like you had suggested. Unfortunately though the laptop that I usually keep my stories on came to a slow and painful death after five long years of service so he was put to rest, but not before a friend, who is far more computer savvy than myself, managed to restore my work and load it to my new laptop.

So I’ve made the corrects you mentioned and thank you so much for them! I appreciate it more than you can ever know and you’ve also managed to make my muse interested in this ‘verse again so there might be more forth coming in the next month or so. Thank you again!

I like it. I hope you continue it. The Buffy/Vala pairing was different, but very HOT!

Just. Wow. Very good.. Perhaps a time to reflect.... and maybe have a cigarette....Phew! lol.

Please continue with this story. It has definite possibilities. I think you did an awesome job!

only fantastic? this story should be renamed to simply fantastic :)

all of the characters were spot on, i could actually picture them saying the script. *very naughty places with this fic lol*

anyway, i definitely hope you continue on in this 'verse, would be nice to see some backstory for the group, and a daniel / buffy / Vala pairing would be very welcome lol for some reason i definitely see Vala being the dominant one in that relationship, normally and sexually dominant. (she does look amazing in tight leather ;) )

just to say, fantastic, very sexy work, definitely looking out for more of this.

M

Ok, you know me, not big on the femslash, but I love your writing and read anyways. And boy am I glad I did!! This was great!

I can see Buffy hooking up with Vala, especially if Daniel had been involved somehow. But those two women just... fit together. If that makes any sense. It was totally believable.

And I love that the boys watcher. :D Which reminds me. *pokes Ava with stick* What happened to the Buffy sandwich with Daniel and Cam? Huh? Inquiring minds want to read.... ;)

Pol

I know I was surprised with how well they seemed to play off each other. In all honesty I came into this thinking I just wanted to write sweaty but the opening scene took on a life of its own and they seemed to just click. Now I'm a firm Buffy/Vala'shipper. I think I'm one of the few. ;)

*rubs arm* I haven't forgotten about it but a Buffy/Oliver Queen stole my muse and since I'm just finishing that one up I can focus on the plethora of threesome fics I have planned.

ooh, *fans self* That was hot. I am envious of how well you write sensuality, stretching the sexual tension so far it explodes. Absolutely envious.

And Daniel's reaction? *Chortles* Perfect, utterly hilariously perfect.

Poor Danny...imagine if those two cornered him? *ponders*

Thank you so much for the kind review. Posting FR21 always makes me nervous because I'm afraid of sounding repetitive or boring but it seems to be received well...I should probably stop worrying.

I'm not a fan of fem slash, but I am a fan of well written stories. This was wonderfully done, and I would like to see what you would do with more.

Wow! Thank you! I think that's one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten.

Very enjoyable story. Scorching Hot.

I like the little power games you had Vala and Buffy playing during the fun. It was real for the characters. When Vala winks that the camera I laughed because I realized that she had played the entire scene to stake her claim to Buffy. Buffy, being more naive, didn't realize why Vala was so amorous all of sudden, and frankly, she really didn't care. The Buffy you had in this story was back to being the Buffy of Season Six - so overwhelmed by the pain - by loosing her friends that she just went with the flow. Val knew it or knows it and was also frightened about Buffy leaving her if they stayed in the new reality so she staked her claim.

Or not....

I could be wrong about the plot I saw through the ah, “fun.”

I seem to be saying this a lot in reference to your stories today but did I mention how blazingly HOT the story was?

As for Cam and Daniel witnessing it, I guess boys will be boys.

I would like to, um, see more in this verse, torrid affairs optional. (Big Evil Grin)

No you got the underlining plotline prefectly. I was shooting for a more season 6 Buffy and if I continue on in this 'verse we'd find out how she lost everyone and everything to the Ori.

Though having Vala and Daniel to turn would be a small comfort...at least until Danny died.

*hugs* I simply adore you.

It was just too good! Please write more!!!

*beams* Thank you and I'll try.