I like this! Will there be more?

Nice... Loved it :)

Good work!! Hope there's more to this series soon!!!

Cute, lol
Real cute. Fitting too

That was cute! I absolutely loved the Coco Puffs line!

Ha.. Every time I imagine Ava swinging a shovel at a demon, I can't help but laugh. And the demon goo running down Connor's neck! Not something I wanna feel. Nice one shot!

i just edited some dialogue.... so read it again! hehe.

I haven't seen season 2 of Supernatural yet, so I'm not really familiar with Ava, but from the fic, I was able to gather what I needed to know (that she's like Sam), though I was somewhat unclear on what exactly her power was. It seemed like it might have been teleportation, since they went from falling to being on the ground, but if she can teleport, I'm unsure as to why she didn't do so earlier. Can you clarify her power in the next fic in the series for those of us who aren't privy to the canon?

Anyway, I love the idea of this series, but there was one line that kind of bothered me in terms of Connor's characterization. His actions are great across the board (busting the manacles, making Ava take off her shoes, etc), but part of his dialogue sounded more like Dawn or Buffy than Connor. Particularly, the line "yay you!" seems completely un-Connor to me, unless you clarify that he's saying it with a completely flat affect or a bite to his voice. He's more towards the Angel/Oz end of the dialogue spectrum than the Buffy/Dawn/Willow end, and it's a lot easier for me to imagine any of the girls sans Faith) saying this line than it is for me to picture Connor doing so.

Otherwise, it was great! More attention to Connor's facial expressions, body language, and tone of voice would go a long way towards firming up his characterizations as well, but on the whole, you certainly seem to be on the right track, and I look forward to see what you come up with next!

yeah, it was meant to be a flat yay you.... but i changed some things after i looked over it again (and got your review) so check it out and lemmie know if its an improvement! :0)