needs a sequel...perhaps the good doctor should take Xander out to dinner?

*grins evily*

Ewwwwwww

Is pretty good. Especially if I picture Hannibal as the actor who played him in the newest movie.

That was great. You captured Hannibal perfectly and this was a new side to Xander.
Beautifully written and slightly eww but definitely great.

CUTE!!!! AWESOME!!! LOVE IT!!!!

I just read this one (again) and the one about Xander and Imhotep, and I hope you will continue in this vein. I can't think of a person I'd like you to pair Xander with right now, but I'm sure there are plenty of phychotic murderers who would appreciate a Xander of their own. (And I will appreciate reading about it, hehe)

Fantastic. A few spelling and grammar blips but they couldn't take away from the impact of the story.

Xander and Hannibal was a whacked but fun pairing the way you write it. The dialog between Xander and Spike was great - good that HL bugged the house so he got to enjoy it too.

I guess Buffy was eaten in the non-fun way? Its nice that you leave it up in the air who and how.

This part just kills me:
The end…
And they all lived happily ever after, except Buffy who was eaten…

This a my second reading of this story and I find myself liking it more the 2nd time around. I liked the premise. But I kept waiting for the bloody-screaming/guts filled punch line. In that respect the story was a little unfulfilling.

Hannibal needed to be a little more sinister/subconsciously threatening and your slightly OOC Fed-UP!Xander a little less passive but other than that it was pretty good.

sniker ya know i could actually see this one happening

interesting story

works well

So many times you read a fic and think, "Well, anyone could have thought of that." This one, though, was wonderful, and I certainly would have never thought of it, but I loved it anyway.

cool story

write more like it

tonisimone

YEEEEEEE!!!!!!! Was wonderful!!! Very yum-alicious and all funny-like. Oddly I'm rather hungry after reading this, which may or may not be a bad sign. =) Would very much like to see the pr0n part, but I completely understand not being able to write the naughty bits. I can't write good smut to save my life. I love the sweet luvvy-duvvy-ness of Hannibal becoming facinated with Xan's persona/soul and restraining himself for the boy's sake. Awwwwwww!!!!

This was an interesting premise, and you seem to have a fairly good grasp of the mechanics of writing. However, you didn't succeed in selling me on your characterization of Xander. I don't believe the Xander of canon would act this way, and you didn't give sufficient reason for his change of heart/behavior/morals for me to believe that he could become that different.

Also, while I'm a died-in-the-wool slash fan, the sex scene in this one came out of the blue, and was actually quite distasteful for me. Interesting attempt, and it wasn't a bad first try at slash - certainly far better than others I've seen. Given your creativity and story-telling abilities, I suspect that in five years you'll be looking back at this with chagrin and amazement at how far you've come.

Hmmm, I see your points. Thank you for taking time to point out the flaws in a supportive way. I appreciate it. The next time I write slash (or any fic for that matter) I'll consider what you said.

Thank you very much indeed.

Sio~