*snicker* Bad Dawn for letting Sam try to fumble his way through an explanation!

I just giggle every time I see this manip that you did. And now you've added the perfect little drabble to go along with it. Yay!!

My plot paid off and I got this nommed for the COA! The Xander piece in chapter five.

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Ahh...Dawn and Sam are so sweet together. I can see Dawn falling head over heel in their first meeting. Keep writing these wonderful drabbles okay.

I didn't see the Gordon episode but with all the ff's about him I am REALLY not liking the dude.
Heck I've read ff's that have mad Snape, Darla, Lucius MALFOY, Stryker from the DH verse and Edward from the AB verse likeable. But not a ONE on that rat's ass bastard.

And the shooting your cousin ... Shoot now I HAVE to go see his episode.
He had seemed a bit nice in Jo's Journals. What a shame *Sighs*

Yeah, Gordon is easy to portray as a bad ass hunter guy who only sees black and white. I actually have another fic idea started where it shows how he came to be. It would paint him in a bit different light.

The episodes with him in it were both good.

*giggles* Awww poor Tara. But that is STILL funny. I can JUST see his face *grins*

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Like the pic's which I followed here. I think the idea of the mono-log to the car that is probably going on in Deans head, it is probably one well worth listening to . Possibly without the swearing because it'd be incomprehensible.


Not sure if I missed something but two things didn't sound right.

softened as realized
softened as he realized- maybe.
and
out how to undo, opposed too
out how do undo

Do you think Dean would cry if Tara couldn’t turn ‘The Impala’ back?

Thanks for the catches. The dangers of doing a quick double drabble and focusing on word count instead of grammar. All fixed now and still at 200 words.

I think Dean would collapse. Next to Sammy dying, that would be the worse thing to him. Something permanent happening to his baby.

Okay, I'm giggling so much reading this latest chapter. I expected something much more serious, like only half of their body turn invisible. NOT the beloved Impala turns hot pink. I can just imagine Dean driving that. Ruin his macho image. Post more of this delightful drabble, okay.

The prompt called for wackiness, so wacky I delivered. :-)

If you didn't see it, I've added a manip to this and also in my Supernaturally Twisted collection of the hot pink Impala.

A hot pink Impala? I love it! Any chance of a picture?

I actually plan to do a pic of it tonight. I wrote this over lunch at work, so I don't have the files or time I need to create the image here. I'll post it in my Supernaturally Twisted collection later. :-)

Yay, nice use of Lenore and Tara. I like how you had them related, and Lenore wanting to save Tara. :)

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I wanted one more and thought... oohhh Tara and Lenore related.

Oh no, you can't just leave it there. We need to know how Dawn managed not to become fried on the ceiling! More, more! I demand it!

I'm kind of thinking of incorporating this into my Brother's Keeper realm. But I still hadn't decided exactly what direction I want it to go.

Again nice use of family. Tony Harris and Ellen... Wow, talk about two different sides of a coin. Great job with this one. And I like the simplicity with Xander and his annoucement of his father's death to his Aunt. I know you had to use only 100 words, but it really works. And it kinda hurts that Xander didn't get a chance to become with his Aunt.

I was going for "not the obvious" family connections. I could see Ellen as the kind that forsaked the Harris family and went out on her own. So Xander showing up set off all her warning bells. Of course Xander would probably be wary of any family of his own.

Maybe I should flesh this out so that Xander gets more interaction with them.

Nice use of Joyce and John. And way to pack a lot of emotion into 100 words!

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Wedding and a funeral. Two completely different events that make people cry.

Awww. Poor Dean. This just hurts so much more after watching last night's episode. But you do have to feel for Dean (and for Buffy). They both want normal and both know they will never get either.

Great job sweetie!

I kind of wrote this snippet thinking about the description for the episode. Probably why I title it, "What If".

I really want to write more of this story from Dean's POV. He's got an interesting mind.

Nice and evil. I'm a little confused as to who exactly told the lunch lady to go ahead and do it. Was it the Demon?

Oh by the way, luchlady should probably be lunchlady. Feel free to erase/edit this part of the review once you fix it.

You missed the Glochner reference. The lunchlady's mother was Nurse Glochner from the prison episode. Just to warn you, I hope to write a Simpsons/BtVS/SPN crossover for this week's challenge that using the lunchlady, nurse Glochner and groundskeeper Willie. Be scared, be very scared.

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PS: Thanks for the spelling catch. :-)

This just makes my heart hurt. Because in Gordon's mind there is only black and white, no shades of grey. And Gunn crossed the line, so Gordon did his job. It makes me hate him, oh boy does it, but at the same time it's good you held true to the character.

I debated on whether or not Gordon would actually outright kill someone (a family member to boot). But then I thought of how he turned quickly with no regard for Dean or Sam when they started protecting Lenore from him. Plus, killing Dean to get Sammy too in Hunted. Then I thought, if Gordon found out a member of his own family was working side by side with a vampire instead of killing it, he would flip. I think that he would reason in his mind that working with a vampire is as good as being turned, therefore, the offending party must be eliminated.

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