img he he he you are so silly ha ha ha this is the funniest fic I've ever read ho ho ho

Oww..side hurt from laughing(had to bite a pillow too so that I didn't wake everyone up at close to 5am)...I'm loving this fic, so what if their ooc, i bet if they could control their chars sometimes they'd act like this for fun...like you see in outakes on serious dramas or movies...keep up the hysterically funny work...love dawn messing with draco's mind!

This is an interesting story, but the (please don't hate me for this) grammar and spelling sometimes make it hard to follow.
I am enjoying Faith and Buffy insulting Snape. It's hilarious.

Ooh! Germany. Visiting or living?

Actually, Scots-Irish, French, German, and Cuban. I live in the States. I pick up on British slang pretty easily. I love the Harry Potter series, plus between Giles, Spike, and Wes, I heard even more. You should hear me after I watch Buffy by the season. I start using more Buffy slang. I haven't quite mastered the Babble yet.

I don't hate your for that, it is late in Germany ;D,
maybe I will look through it tomorrow and improve the grammar and spelling....^^

Living!!! Born and raised!!!
Oh and by the way, the german grammar is way more complicated than the english one,
so we tend to use the german grammar on our englich stories!!!

Are you native english?!

Insane but cute.

Sometimes I'm not able to tell if the crazy word choice is deliberate for laughs or a misspelling. It can make it a little hard to figure out sometimes, but I do laugh a lot.

it depends on which words you mean^^

This story is...(loool)...amazing...(loool)...I just can't...(loool)...stop laughing.
I just...(lol)...love the whole...(lol)...Buffy and Faith thing....
Can't wait for the next chapter (says with tears in her eyes...).

Thanks for your review, glad you like it^^

Completely insane story. Very funny though.

:sigh: just when im getting better from almost having died from the giggles there you go trying to kill me again! is it some sort of conspiracy to make me laugh to death? btw awesome story!

Thank you very much!!!
And no, we are not trying to kill you, at least not on purpose!!

The opening phrase 'Buffy, Faith, Willow, Xander and Dawn exited the Hogwartsexpress....' *Hogwartsexpress* made me think naughty thoughts. I'm insane and it is all YOUR FAULT! Love this chapter and the insane Dawn. I'm sure that if I'm Draco, I'll prefer to suffer the indignity of walking rather than sitting in the carriage with Dawn. Looking forward for more insanity in the coming chapters.

PS: English is not my native language. I'm an asian.

hey, thanks, but we did warn you... ;D
And by the way, it is not so bad to be insane...

Hey, is your native language english?!

Why do I get visions of Dawn as Shego and Ginny as Kim Possible verbally taunting and flirting with each others?

Wonderful

Interesting parody.

I did notice your note saying this is your first story written in English. I might suggest seeing if you could find someone whose native language is English to beta the story for you. I'm one of the first to admit the language has its own odd little quirks that can be difficult to get right off. There are a few places where the wrong word is used such as using "remember" where one would expect to see "reminded" that can be quite jarring, and it's not always 100% clear if the word choice was intentional or because of English being used as a second language.

I'd offer, but I'm already proofing/editing three works-in-progress and don't think I could handle adding to the load at the moment.

Poor Draco, he doesn't stand a chance. I like how you're writing Dawn, very witty!

This is a parody of the absolute worst sort that over emphasises the worst aspects of fannon to a whole new level and insults all that is good in both series.

While yes, it is funny. It is only funny in how retarded you portray the behaviour of all the characters as i suspect you are doing it deliberately.


However if you actualy believe the characters are like that and are trying to portray them in a realistic way as you see it. I laugh at you, you bloody idiot.


It is a fine line between a quality parody and an absolute failure. They can both be the same basic story with the diference being why it was written that way.


Granted, i am not a writer, but i know what i like and i know the truth of cannon. This isnt even vaguely close.


EDIT: Musta missed that notice about this being OOC, I do hereby take back any insult to your inteligence and accept this to be a very well written parody done in bad taste.

If you don't like it don't read it, now one forced you to read it.
And just by the way, we said that the characters are ooc, so
you should know that they are not like that in the series,
but maybe you are not bright enough to realize that!!!!

To the nonwriter:
If you have such fine taste, why don't you try it yourself?!
And if you think you have to play the Slasher, have fun with it, because I don't care!!!
Some people don't have anything better to do, than reading stories they don't like until the
last sentence.

LOL!
What's next, Faith doing body cavity search for sticks on Hermione, Snape and McGonagall?

*lol* Maybe, but I think McGonagall would not like that ;D

It's a wonder that Snape doesn't use the killing curse on himself to put himself out of his misery. I'm sure even Voldie would think that is preferable to being around the Scoobs for longer than 30 seconds. Of course since they are being equal opportunity smart asses to everyone, even the good guys might take that option as well.