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tigerstarReview:
This is my third time reading threw what you have up and it is still one of my favorite stories on how Dawn comes to Hogwarts! I do hope that you will continue with this story and finish it as it is so very different then the rest out there.
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tigerstar] • Date [1 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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rhiowenReview:
you cant leave it like that! thats so cruel, please please please update! then ill up the rating to a 10 :)
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rhiowen] • Date [1 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ShieldageReview:
Ooh! Awesome :)
Read this in one sitting. I'm happy that Severus=pie :D
Very good story, nice amount of random weirdness like Luna's sayings and the visible empathy potion.
It didn't occur to them that driving a magical car to track down someone who might be in animal form or /invisible/ was a bad idea?
Nice ups and downs. Wait, was the bug that particular shiny one? Heh.
Good story arc and management of time :D
Nicely described AU, nice touch with Willow's magic being touched with Buffy. Poor everybody.
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Shieldage] • Date [27 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AomizuokoReview:
AAARRRGH! How could you leave it like this? You kill me with your cliff hangers! Please update!
By the way, I love your portrayal of the Slytherins. They're not necessarily *bad* per se, but they aren't necessarily good either. :D I particularly like that you didn't portray Pansy as people normally do yet at the same time staying true to her character. I love it! Please update more!
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Aomizuoko] • Date [25 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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mokahiReview:
I adore this story!
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mokahi] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ErisMomReview:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE this is a wonderfully written story
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ErisMom] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AlmadynisReview:
PLEASE MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Almadynis] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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bannerReview:
I just reread this story from the beginning. I still love it - I've read it at least three times. I especially enjoy seeing the Sly students as real, faceted people; kids, in fact. You are giving "minor" characters depth. This story is fun and interesting, with so many new and nifty concepts. Please update. I can't be the only reader who is twisting on this cliffhanger.
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banner] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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ChristyReview:
okay, that's just not fair! You can't leave us hanging like that...we need more....we DEMAND more! lol please, seriously, I'm loving this story...don't give up on it. It's really great.
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Christy] • Date [5 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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valdimarianReview:
Bloody hell! You cut out at what's probably THE biggest cliffhanger of this arc of your epic, and you haven't updated for almost a YEAR?! That's bleedin inhumane it is!
PS: you might have wanted to state how old Draco is, or what year they're in, it's only somewhere around chapter 16 that you mention they're in 6th year.
PPS: Also, Dawn is 5 years younger than Buffy and co, according to most sources Buffy & the HP crew are actually the same age, but most authors ignore this due to the 7 seasons / 7 books correlation. Just an FYI.
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valdimarian] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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zafaranReview:
More, more, more, please. This was so good that I was reading instead of heading to town to do laundry, so I made it into an ebook right quick so I could read it on my PDA, and was vastly entertained by the story while I was at the Laundromat. It was the first time my back rehab was to the point I could go do a bulk load of things that don't fit the hand sink for getting washed out (tomorrow will be a trip down to do pillows), so toward the end it was fold a little, rest and let my back quit hurting, fold a little more, repeat. Your story of Dawn the Kneazle made the time pass so much faster than it could have. Any chance of getting more chapters some time soon? Pretty please? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Not to mention, I want to find out if Spike still has his soul (I believe it is canon that Dru had problems turning him and Angelus had to finish what she started). I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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CatiyaneReview:
I just found this story and read it in one sitting. It is fantastic, and I await the continuation of it with baited breath. Dawnie the kneazle? Awesome idea!!!
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Catiyane] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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julzReview:
I love this story
it is in my top five
and itis not at the bottom
I love the way that we get to see draco and all the other slytherins
making crabbe and goyle doesnt ring real but it's just somthing you did for fun.
I also have issues with draco's dream in the first few chapters
but it's because your story is soo great and everything is at such a high caliber that I mention these my only issues with youur story
I enjoy all of regina's explorations and difficulties with the students. I love the ways she reacts to Snape and Blaise
Please write somemore
I cant wait to find out what Snape saw in the bed and I would love to know what is going on in Draco's head. Is he inconsolable because he thinks Regina is dead and he can't feel her anymore or is he with her in the misty place or can he sense that she's near but they are seperated?
please please please write more
with a bherry on top and chocolate sprinkles and fresh raspberries
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julz] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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JamieTReview:
An absolutely superb story, which i would so much love to see continued!
Please do carry on with this, it's brilliant.
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JamieT] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ScrappychicReview:
Wow. This is... Wow! How did I not read this before??
Great story with a VERY original concept. I hope to see more of this soon. *puppy dog eyes*
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Scrappychic] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated