Review of chapter "Quidditch and Curses" from
LovinXoversReview:
very good!!!
keep it up :)
you have just made me start writing a new chapter for my story..
xx
Comments from author:
Thank you, hey that's cool, I like inspiring people!
Review By [
LovinXovers] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from
AshDawnSoulmatesReview:
I love this story and I hope you update soon! At first I didn't really see how you'd be able to make it fit together but after reading it, it makes total sense and it is awesome!
Review By [
AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from
TerapsinaReview:
I am in love in your story please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
I give you 10
Sirella
Review By [
Terapsina] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from
pickyoulifeReview:
I like the direction this is going in you should continue with this story.
Review By [
pickyoulife] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Excellent
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from
mithrilandtjReview:
I like the idea of Dorinclaff.
Can't wait for the big Date. Should be fun.
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talks and dreams" from
RubyReview:
I think this is a decent story but you really need to check over your grammar. There are quite a few mistakes that make the story sound a bit awkward. Other than that I think it is pretty good.
Review By [
Ruby] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dorin.....what?!" from
TamoraCardboardMoonReview:
...you're kidding me.
*hits head on desk* There's only four houses. And EVERYONE, EVERY HUMAN ON THE PLANET has qualities from each house. Besides, wouldn't students have heard about this house? Especially all the ones who've read "Hogwarts; a History"? And tthe Sorting Hat always sings a song at the beginning of the sorting ceremony... and has never mentioned "Dorinclaff."
I understand that it's your story and that you're making it up... but honestly. TRY to make it fit at least a little! Just choose a house that actually EXISTS in the story!
Comments from author:
As you said, it is my story and I can make up everything I want, so if you don't like what I write,
don't read it!
Though I am sorry that I shocked you with my choice, but it will stay that way, no one bothered it before,
so you will have to live with it!
Review By [
TamoraCardboardMoon] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order of Dagon" from
TGirlReview:
glad you are back. i really liked this chapter. keep up the good work! update soon!!!
~TG~
Review By [
TGirl] • Date [14 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Order of Dagon" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Excellent.
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [14 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order of Dagon" from
mithrilandtjReview:
Love the new chapter.
Dawn & Draco are finally dating. Cool!
PS: You so need to check your grammer.
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Order of Dagon" from
DrixReview:
I'm so glad to see another chapter being posted. it was interesting to see the wizards try to figure out the key.
Review By [
Drix] • Date [13 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hogwarts?! Why me?!" from
RubyReview:
Your grammar needs work.
Review By [
Ruby] • Date [13 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shovel threats and the Order of Dagon" from
MistressTitaniaReview:
So good, can't wait until Dawn lays down the law to those meddling boys! Hmmm...really enjoying the story and curious to see where you take it. Look foward to more, always enjoy Dawn/Draco, since I've always felt she'd fall head over heels for the mini!spike in a second.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!!
I also like the Pairing Draco/Dawn
And I am glad you like my story!
Review By [
MistressTitania] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shovel threats and the Order of Dagon" from
WinterRayneReview:
Great Update!!!!!
love this fic so far !!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you... ^_^
Glad you like it, stay tuned^^
Review By [
WinterRayne] • Date [25 May 07] • Not Rated