Review of chapter "18: Finally Forgiveness, Betrayals Learned" from
EpicllyFreeReview:
I've just read this story in one shot and all I have to say is: dear god this is a fantastic story. I love the direction that its headed in! I hope you update soon.
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EpicllyFree] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18: Finally Forgiveness, Betrayals Learned" from
darkmagicianReview:
Damn! *wipes eyes* That was an emotional chapter. Now that they've aired out their dirty laundry, they can truly heal. Keep up the good work. I'm currently at an impasse on my stories, but I'll keep popping in here for updates. Hope the next one is soon.
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darkmagician] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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springReview:
Love this chapter. I have to wonder though what is causing Buffy's mood swings. More soon please.
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spring] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18: Finally Forgiveness, Betrayals Learned" from
JanessaRavenwoodReview:
Dropping this story from tracking. This has become such a Dysfunction Junction that I don't care about any of them of anymore. If they all died, it would be doing that world a service...
Comments from author:
Well thanks for telling me. Scoobies and dysfuntion, wow they are so not like that. Have a pleasant night!
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JanessaRavenwood] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [4 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
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it gets you in and out of places in a lot
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Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad that you're hanging in here with me. My bunnies like those disgusting sugary-goodness peeps, the pink ones. But they'll take your carrot and they'll like it.
Have a good day.
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Dragonelf] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18: Finally Forgiveness, Betrayals Learned" from
wyvernwolfReview:
Thanks for the update.
I feel that the apology from the Scoobies comes across as being not totally sincere and a bit self-righteous. The line from Xander, “And our Buffy returns to us,” Xander stated. “We’ve been waiting.” just sounds extremely possessive and not at all forgiving. People change as they grow older but it sounds like the Scoobies don't want to, or cannot accept that Buffy has changed too. They want the "old" Buffy, the one they could control and wouldn't stand up for herself (Yeah, I have issues with the Scoobies and their behaviour.).
And I hope there's more to come with the Giles' situation, as it was resolved much too easily, without him accepting that he had erred and in a pretty bad way too.
I do enjoy the story and look forward to any further updates.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I'll update as much as I can. Xander is quite possessive. I think most everyone has issues with the Scoobies and their behavior. Yes, there's more to come with Giles; he didn't get off that easily. I'm glad that you're sticking in there while you wait for updates. I'll update when I can. Hopefully soon. This story just isn't agreeing with me. Have a good day!
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wyvernwolf] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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clarityfadesReview:
"There's the Buffy we know"...not the line, word for word, but the line that annoyed me the most. It still seems like the Scoobies are blaming Buffy for most, NOT ALL, but most of what's gone wrong in their lives (or in their relationships as Scooby-friends). Perhaps if they hadn't been so oppressively judgmental, she wouldn't have pulled away so much. (& if they hadn't been stupid enough to pull her outta Heaven, but that kinda goes without saying...even though I just did. :D) I'm glad Buffy knows the truth about Giles, but I don't feel like that's really resolved...Giles did take the easy way out by telling all the Scooby secrets...but I wonder, did he bother telling EVERYTHING HE did? All the damage HE caused, somehow I think Giles still managed to gloss over it. I'm glad Remus recognized that ordering the Slayer around wouldn't be the best thing for his health...& the convo was good...it still seems like everyone's blaming Buffy for not being who they need (or want) her to be, rather than just letting her be Buffy.
Interesting chapter...hope to see updates a bit more often, as your schedule permits.
Comments from author:
Yes, there's a reason for the lines being, so well . . . No, the situation with Giles isn't resolved. I don't mind, but the next chapter is it. Everything is spilled, aired out for the HP-verse characters to see. Even the new situation between Buffy and Willow. Then finally, we can move forward. Get to the 'New Destiny' bit.
Thanks for the review, I hope that I can update more too. This year's been beyond hectic and the story just didn't want to come out. Glad that you're hanging in here, with me and the story. Have a good day!
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clarityfades] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII: Connections Finished" from
zafaranReview:
{snicker} Nicely done bit of laughter to end the chapter. I like how this Dumbledore is showing his true manipulative colors more than he did in canon. Can we get some karmic payback on him? He makes you think about the old phrase: "With friends like these, who needs enemies." I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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AudioSpectrumReview:
absolutely love it! can't wait for more!!!!
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AudioSpectrum] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII: Connections Finished" from
springReview:
This chapter started a bit confusing, but I still loved this chapter. I really really loved the last part of this chapter very very funny. Please please update this wonderful fic again soon.
Review By [
spring] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KnightWulfReview:
loved the chapter don't much like dumbbledore any but any good story so far can't wait till the next chapter
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KnightWulf] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVI: Off on the Wrong Foot" from
springReview:
Have to say that I love this fic so far, I think it is absolutely wonderful. I really am very curious as to why Buffy is having so many problems with her magic when she can feel it everywhere. It should be very very very interesting when Harry gets knocked off his high horse (I didn't like how Harry treated everyone at the beginning of the movie). Again this fic is very wonderful so far and I am very eager to read more of this wonderful fic. (I originally wasn't going to read this fic) Please please please update again soon.
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spring] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVI: Off on the Wrong Foot" from
blackrozeReview:
love it plz continue
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blackroze] • Date [26 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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darkmagicianReview:
Whoops! That didn't go over too well. I'm hoping the Dawn-meister can pull Harry out of his shell. Please tell me you're gonna hook them up! *feeds the plot bunny*
Comments from author:
I didn't want it to go over to well because it sets up for the Scoobies, the Weasleys, and Hermione to pull Harry out of his funk because he is not going to be that annoying angsty-no-one-understands-me-Harry of Book 5. I think you'll agree when I say no one could stand Harry for most of Book 5.
Ah sorry, I've already got someone planned for Dawn. There have been tiny-teeny hints in a couple of chapters. You don't need to feed the plot bunny - it's quite well feed. But I'll save it up for later. I've got the next chapter planned out. I just need time to write it. My best friend's getting married, so I'm pretty busy until the beginning of June.
Don't worry, the next chappie will be up after June 1st. Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you're still enjoying the story.
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darkmagician] • Date [24 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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soulfuloneReview:
all right, you have my undivided attention with this story...and though in your story a Remus/Buffy pairing sounds good...i can't seem to keep the face of the guy who played Remus in the movies out of my mind.....and HIM....a good pairing with Buffy does not make....but hey, its fanfiction...and not the movie....so i'm always willing to suspend my disbelief for a good story....which this is....thanks for sharing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Yay! A follower! I like followers! Ah yes, Buffy and Remus in my opinion is a most excellent pairing. The guy in the movie has never bothered me. He isn't what I pictured as Remus, but the movie-version of book characters are never what I picture them to be. I'm very glad that you're enjoying this story. Thanks again for the review.
Review By [
soulfulone] • Date [23 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]