Haha! Pretty amusing! Please continue!

OK good now more plz. Sorry, Real good read, but I have come to the end and would like another chapter plz.

ummmm..... all i keep thinking is "what the fuck?!"
not that i dont like it, i just think im massively confused, though i also keep thinking "how much of faith's personality is supposed to have come from snape" cuz that's just amazing. and i love seeing him so confused but still trying to be a good dad.

and harry! haha! i loved that

the concept is interesting, I like your writing style... but... I don't buy this Faith. Faith is kinda nuts, but a more controlled nuts, especially After prison. She doesn't go around flaunting what she would consider weaknesses.

Interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Interesting ideas,

but.... your writing babbles in a cute but unsatisfying way.

Character development, dialog, etc are good things.

Ok i REALLY want to like this story, i like your ideas but your excicution of hte story can really do with some work.
Your characterizations are really hollow and all the characters speak the same way. Show us some personality thorugh the way they speak...not just certain catch phrases.

Faith is a sexual character but i don't think you have portrayed it in a beleiveable way.
You also jump around without really giving us details about what is going on...for example how did the deatheaters make it to the forest....faiths walk to the class room....its just like BAM...we are here because teh writer wanted me to be...BAM we are here because the writer wanted me to be..BAM BAM BAM!!

You need to take your time...try to make the story flow in a more believeable way..
Work on your characters..

Why did Faith choose Harry? (other htan teh fact taht you wanted her to)
How did Snape react to the rest of the class..he couldn't just up and leave them alone with volitol potion ingredients.

Well rounded stories show a little bit of whats going on with everyone...not just one maincharacter.
Show us what the characters are doing and thinking through their actions and speach..don't tell us.

Can't wait to see what happens when the whole gang comes to town. Gotta love how Faith was going to sex up Harry to piss Snape off.

Poor Faith.
She needs her buds nearby.

BTW you're right. Faith is younger than Buffy, by at least 1 or 2 years.
Buffy was called at 15, "died" at 16 which called Kendra. Kendra was Slayer for about 8+/- months until Dru killed her, which called Faith at 15/16 (Buffy was 17 when Kendra died) ;)

How old is Faith meant to be in your story? Because she's acting like an insane person bursting into a classroom in the middle of the day and dragging a pupil out to have sex with them.

A sexually normal woman over twenty put in the middle of a boarding school filled with smelly pimply teenage boys would get something to eat from the school canteen then go lie on a bed and wank if they were so hungry and horny or go to the nearby village pub and have a ploughman's lunch and try and score with an adult.

And why Harry? He'd rather a dweeb. Surely she'd choose Seamus to scratch her seemingly uncontrollable itch.

If Dumbledore or MacGongall finds out she's done this won't they blow her up with their wands if they are any kind of principals worth their salt?

If you marked this story a comedy I'd have no worries but because it's not I'm assuming you want me to think as a reader this is plausible behaviour.

I'm making Faith about eighteen in this story. In the series, I always thought she was younger than Buffy, even though she acted older. And just because this chapter ended with her dragging him off to have sex doesn't mean it's actually going to happen.

Interesting! Can't wait to see how this plays out!

Hogwarts will never be the same.

Ooh, interesting concept. I like so far. Can't wait to see where its going.

Believe it not, I can actually SEE Faith being Snape's daughter.
Especially considering canon Faith's mom's background.
Even in BtVS Faith was never 100% sure who "daddy" was.

Yeah, I definitely see Snape being Faith's dad.