If you become inspired to do so, I would love to see this story continued!

Good start!

More please.

interesting

This is a brilliant beginning. I hope one day soon you can come back to it. Its not often we get to see a younger sg1 team would do alongside the scoobs even if it is only 2/4.

This is a wonderful beginning.... why haven't you completed it....

Later and Love
Bunney

[snerk]

Nice.

The "Nick" Thing threw me at first, but it was an interesting surprise. Are you planning on continuing this? If yes, I'd be interested to see what Nick's story is (i.e. originwise).

Oh, I've *planned* to continue it ever since I wrote it; I have 800 words of the next chapter on my hard drive. There's a plot point that I need to do more research on, though, and I keep getting distracted by "ooh, shiny" or real life concerns.

Nick is a lot of fun to write; I don't know why more people don't do "mini!team" stories. =)

*giggles madly*

I have no clue who Nick & John are, but I assume that at some point in the SG universe Daniel & Jack got turned into teenagers?

I like this story.

Me likey this one. Nick is great. Who didn't have that cute geeky guy friend in high school? (Now if only they would all turn out to look like Daniel - down hormones...) Sorry. Anywho, love this almost Dawn/Daniel story. And I like the idea of Buffy threatening him without him even getting it. It made me giggle. Continue please.

Very good set up. I really look forward to seeing how this all turns out.

Interesting timing choice, by the by, I would've expected something with Glory (Due to the God-ness and the Gou'ald calling themselves gods and all.)

Very good use of the Mini-SCG's; Almost no one uses them at all. Anyway; Very cool. I look forward to reading more.

This Story/chapter has reduce me to only a few words " MORE! more? More! MORE!?! ...or maybe that is only one word. :-)

Seriously though I enjoyed this chapter, the character of Daniel Junior, the observations of both Jon and Nick. That altogether makes me want ...more. :-)

Very interesting beginning. And Daniel has a clone, too! Ooh, that could be fun - he knows more languages than Giles. :)

Awesome idea.

Kind of wishing I'd taken part in the Fic-a-thon now. Hmm...

A really good way of getting a Dawn/Daniel pairing without the real squickiness of the age difference. Buffy's just old enough that the difference isn't so bad - and she likes older men anyway. Generally, Dawn's just too young, but I think this works really well, since both 'teenagers' are somewhat 'old' for their age (or young, if you count actual time of being alive - which actually makes Dawn the eldest!).

Keep up the brilliant work and please update soon!

Lol, Tanydwr

Excellent; I look forward to reading more of this, whenever you get around to it. I was so sure the 'cult' was going to be another Glory/Knights of Byzantium-type investigation, but the vampires/Aurelius plot works brilliantly and is definitely entertaining.

More, please!?!

Love the idea of Daniel also having a teenaged clone (although the rationale for that from the original episode, that the Asgard's anti-gene tampering safeguards on O'Neill had kept the clone from maturing properly, wouldn't apply to Daniel as well), and particularly of Jon and "Nick" (naming him after his grandpa, how nice!) going undercover in Sunnydale so near the end of things.

Please tell me there's the potential for a sequel or two?

There'll be more, don't worry. I just have some other things in the queue to finish before I write the rest of it. I'm glad you liked it!

As for the more technical question, I figured that in an AU where both Daniel and Jack were cloned in "Fragile Balance", they would of course *both* have had anti-gene tampering safeguards put on them, for whatever reason. Maybe Daniel doesn't have Jack's advanced Ancient genetics, but some of the other galactic powers had their eye on Daniel from quite early on in the series; Thor could easily have decided he (or even all of SG-1, due to their general importance) deserved protection as well.

Please you just can't stop the story there......I need to know what will happened next...I just have to know hehe.
I can just imagine how Jon and Nick will get involved in the fight and I'm sure that Jack and Daniel won't let them fight on there own.
So please please please continue this story cause it really has a lot of opportunities.