Review of chapter "Meeting the Dragon" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Excellent
Comments from author:
Thanx
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AriaDragoncrest] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Dragon" from
RachelKReview:
Okay, the story is new to me. I haven't seen it before.
Always like AU elements, although I don't know about Dawn or Willow being able to summon things like food and clothing as if they were genis.
Most of the rest of the story works for me... a little time frame of whether this is before or after Glory would be helpful though. It could work either way because sending the Key to Hogwarts would be as safe as sending her to Buffy.
Oh, my other question is how did someone ask to willingly collect Xander's tear for Dawn's wand? I'm certain that something like a chimera's scale could work for Dawn, considering her power and mutability - and it would gentle the story from being uber, uber, uber central character.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if Glory is going to be in this at all, but It'd have to be before Glory if I do add her. I felt there should be something from all of the main Scoobies+Spike(whom I adore) in Dawns wand.
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Not Rated