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TonyTheJewReview:
Great so far up-date soon
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TonyTheJew] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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DarklightReview:
get more chapters out soon, great start, nice touch with the magic stuff.
Review By [
Darklight] • Date [7 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
:)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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Bobboky] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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PATMReview:
Good first chapter, Mood setting and all that. Too bad she didn't
help the young girl with the duffel after kicking scumbag ass though.
Going for the fun violence is what she's about right?
Comments from author:
Faith might have felt bad about it but really she is not the White Knight on the White Charger type hero, she's more the badass in black leather who'll kick the ever loving crap out of the bad guys and then walk away.
Review By [
PATM] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BillReview:
Great start! Love to see how this changes things.
Comments from author:
Oh things are definitely going to be changed, some for the better and some for the worse. It all depends on how Faith's first meeting with the Scooby Gang goes.
Review By [
Bill] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KiwikatipoReview:
Very good so far. I love that book too btw. I'm interested to see what you do next.
Only thing I'm not too sure about is a 'black' pimp in such a small predominately white populace inhabitated town as Sunnydale. I think the Mayor would have cracked down on such shennigans.
Comments from author:
The Mayor probably would have prevented more of those types of activities from being carried on in Sunnydale but not matter how omni-present he is he can't control every part of Sunnydale. Plus he may have allowed a small element of the fully human criminal underground to exist to allow the police department to stay fully funded for other uses. And no matter how predominately white a populace is there will always be minorities in there somewhere.
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Kiwikatipo] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Not Rated