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valdimarianReview:
You said that questions would be answered "next chapter" ... why has there been no next chapter in what... 4 months? Bad author, bad...
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valdimarian] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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zafaranReview:
I'm not at all familiar with the cross on this one, but it's an interesting interlude anyway. I can't wait to see what happens next with Mini-Jack and Dragon-Carter. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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grouchieReview:
you have done a great job combining the two stories using mini Jack was perfect I can't wait what everyone's reaction to Carter the Dragon first that it's a dragon and then that her name is Carter Please say that we will see more of Eragon and Saphria Please give us more soon
Comments from author:
Hmmm...maybe later on. Right now i'm going to focus on Jack and Carter on the different worlds meeting allies and enemies...hehehee
Review By [
grouchie] • Date [4 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
Very cool update!
Review By [
jupitarsdaughter] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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RamenthReview:
Well, it's certaintly more intersting than the actual Eragon books. I look forward to seeng more.
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Ramenth] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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rayneeReview:
like the update.
wish you'd update faster though :(
Comments from author:
I'll try.
^-^
Review By [
raynee] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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AlyspinsReview:
I love jack as a dragon rider. Please write more ASAP
Review By [
Alyspins] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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GoldenRatReview:
So mini-Jack gets sucked into Eragon, huh? The fic seems pretty interesting so far.
Review By [
GoldenRat] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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mithrilandtjReview:
Go Carter!
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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NightscreamReview:
I can actually picture that last scene in my head...and it is pure comedy. This tiny little baby dragon standing up to two full grown adult dragons and a bunch of elves.
Please write more soon.
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Nightscream] • Date [26 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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JediKnightReview:
Nice job on the new chapter, I hope you'll be adding more soon
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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rayneeReview:
great update, please continue
Review By [
raynee] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
Fun interaction between Eragon and Jack!
Review By [
jupitarsdaughter] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ajayneReview:
Ohhh love the concept.
and I have always loved the potential of miniJack.
Ill be certain to check for updates on this one!
-Jayne
Review By [
ajayne] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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MistofRainbowsReview:
It's an interesting story. It's a big choppy in places and could stand to be worked on by a beta reader, but it's worth slogging through. Thanks for the story.
Review By [
MistofRainbows] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Not Rated
