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Review of chapter "The Harvest Festival part 1." from amusewithaview
Review:
I like so far, even though I am a die-hard Sesshoumaru fan-girl. Please, please, PLEASE start seperating 'thoughts' from regular old WORDS. It is confusing to read when the 'mindspeak' is mixed right in with the exposition and descriptions, know what I mean?

Danke, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I love Sesshoumaru too, but I decided that there were way too few Miroku stories. Sorry about that thing with the thoughts, I hope you like the next chapter I just posted.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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