Review of chapter "Get Ready" from
WisprReview:
Now that was a nice chapter, love the visuals with Willow casting the spell. It was vivid and intense and yet not over the top with special effects.
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Ali
Review By [
Wispr] • Date [29 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Get Ready" from
SaiyaSithReview:
I like the way each of the girls get their own storyline. You're doing a fantastic job with this. Hmmm...I wonder...do you need any beta readers? I'm shamelessly offering, because I love getting to read my fav stories before they get posted! ;-) If you do, just email me. I'm pretty quick on the turn-around. Take care!
Review By [
SaiyaSith] • Date [29 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Get Ready" from
OrangesRcoolReview:
I can just feel that something big's about to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I can feel it too! lol lets hope i dont dissapoint! Thanks for reading
Ali
Review By [
OrangesRcool] • Date [29 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mother of All" from
WisprReview:
The Mother Of Darkness puts a whole new twist on the evil female relative who pinches your cheeks! Seriously though you really did a fantastic job with the dream sequence, it was easy for my to imagine the scenes.
Wispr
Comments from author:
thank you! im glad ur likin it!
Ali
Review By [
Wispr] • Date [25 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mother of All" from
SolReview:
Yay mother of d... ugh I'm starting to dislike Anita with a passion. She just rubs me the wrong way. Still love your story update soon and Happy Holiday thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
im starting to notice im hating on Anita, lol. im going to try and write her in a better light cause shes not a bad person, lol. thanks for reading!
Ali
Review By [
Sol] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mother of All" from
deathgeonousReview:
So much of the drama, and all of it good. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [
deathgeonous] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mother of All" from
SandiReview:
Thank you very much for posting. I am snowed in at Spokane, Washington and you are helping to save my sanity. Happy Holidays.
Comments from author:
snowed in? WOW, ive never seen snow before lol just rain and hail which hurts if thrown at u...lol. im glad i could help!
Ali
Review By [
Sandi] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mother of All" from
OrangesRcoolReview:
Belle Morte, concerned about the girls' safety? Hmm...I wonder why...
Comments from author:
mother of all darkness, not belle...thanks for reviewing!
Review By [
OrangesRcool] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mother of All" from
ProCannonFodderReview:
excellent as always...Thank you
Comments from author:
thank you! i had help lol
Review By [
ProCannonFodder] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby said..." from
shelimarIIReview:
i can see faith as a succubus. and maybe cordelia too. not so much willow, but she is already full of powers. it just keeps getting better and better
Comments from author:
no no extra powers for Willow lol don't want to make her invincible...as for faith...........and delia.......hehehe
Review By [
shelimarII] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Like Mother..." from
RachelKReview:
I'm having a little trouble with the relative continuity of your stories, but I enjoy Willow POV stuff. Feinting is making a false move. Fainting, I think is the word you needed.
To answer your question back: Does not the plot of your stories overalap in time frame? If not, then I'm cool, and try to find out where I left off on the other stories in this universe. It has been a while for me.
Comments from author:
i did indeed mean fainting sorry, i get ahead of myself when writing i dont pause to catch it, what do you mean by having trouble with continuity?
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby said..." from
SolReview:
Love that your updating so soon. I have no problem with the point of views, they keep me on the edge of my seat. Update soon I can't wait to see what happens, I was wondering why the pack leader wasn't feeling the power leak or being stolen from them. Or why the munie (sp?) wasn't warning them. Oh wells update soon love your work.
Review By [
Sol] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby said..." from
SpacedCadetReview:
As always, excellent.
Please do not abandon First Days at School!
Comments from author:
it shall not be abandoned worry not! lol i thought i answered ur review a while ago! thanks for reading!
Ali
Review By [
SpacedCadet] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby said..." from
ChaoskittenReview:
really love this- please keep up the first day of school one *g* I love it.
Review By [
Chaoskitten] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby said..." from
RachelKReview:
Interesting mystery, although sometimes hard to tell who the POV character is.
Comments from author:
i'm sorry i do change POV alot, but i usually let it b known whose POV it's on...i shall double check
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated