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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ellie

Review:

I liked it. Nice to see John bring Illyria into his workd and introduce her to the people he liked. And boy was it hilarious to see Illyria try to get Ellen to join the John Winchester harem, and his plea that she stop trying to breed him. LOL

Not that he needs help. I mean he made Sam and Dean without any assistance from her, right? They sure are a credit to the family name.

-Ellie

Comments from author:

I'm pretty sure Illyria assumes that Sam and Dean, by being John's sons, are already amongst her possessions. She's looking at it like what has John done for her lately...to increase her stock of humans, that is. He's gone twenty-three or so years without adding to his tribe so he obviously needs some help. She must have more servants to meet her needs!

Review By [Ellie] • Date [14 Jun 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj

Review:

I like it.

But it's not J-ELLO, it's supposed to be JELL-O

Comments from author:

Thanks for letting me know! I was unsure and meant to look it up and then completely forgot. I just knew it had a hyphen stuck *somewhere* in the name. I'll fix it!

Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]

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