poor clark he's alittle confused :D please update soon :D

The chapter was worth waiting for, and I like how well you mesh the two worlds.

Hedwig is too smart to deliver post to Harry on a Muggle street.
The last few years of delivering without being seen at the Dursleys is testiment to that.

The dialog is a little awkward but the story is getting more interesting.

What, a belated invite to Salem Academy? Superman with a wand is a very funny image. Which brings up a question, wouldn't owl post break the secrecy rule? no telling if someone is out in public amongst muggles when a letter got delivered. Or maybe one just says "trained pet owl" and walks away rapidly.
Still, it would be funny if Clark saw Harry doing magic, and figured that HP was a meteor freak.... or looked into the capsule he arrived in, and found a wand in a compartment (ie all Kryptonians were wand users, heh)--
Or that the private school Lex went to was a magic school. That would be even funnier..

do update this again please! It's very good.

Oh, this is so very good. Please update soon!

Poor Clark! I hope they get to share their secrets soon!

Poor Clark! Bad dog!

OH, the dogfather is so bad! hehe, more please.

good chapter.

Poor Clark ... **snicker** =^.^=

twisted... amazingly twisted...

i love it lol

brilliant stuff so far, definitely one to add to my tracking list

M

Poor confused CLarke.

Interesting - seems to make more sense as you go along.

In the first chapter there seem to be some words that aren't working - when the chapter says 'sully' it would seem to make more sense if the word were sullen, etc.

What is the rationale for Hedwig's behavior? As much as the Dursleys dislike Harry why didn't they give him to Martha? Dumbledore paying them to keep him or making threats?

My rationale for keeping with the Dursleys is simple. Harry is British, Voldemort is British. So Harry must be British to fight another Brit. Or for Dumbledore to keep him safe and/or prepare him to fight Voldy. Your choice.

And the way I have the story written, Martha is Lily's and Petunia's second cousin so I believe Harry would be her second cousin once removed So the Dursleys would be the first of kin with Harry for guardianship after Sirius.

I would think that Dumbledore would want him there, given that he sent them a letter (in the books). I'm sure they would have shipped him off to the Kents if possible in this story. Otherwise, I'm sure they just didn't sent him there on holiday because they didn't want him to be discovered as "abnormal".

Hedwig will come into play in Chapter 5. Where she is will be revealed but don't expect to see her in chapter 4.

I'll see to fix the word choice now that you mentioned it. Thanks.