You know now that the episode "In the Beginning" has aired and we know more abou Mary.... i.e. she was a hunter, as were her dad and mom.... you have more around to play with.

John said Mary wouldn't have approved... which is true, after all she specifically told Dean to his face in the episode, not knowing he was her future son, that she didn't want her children to be hunters.

Also, maybe she could have Angel and Gunn get her boys out of trouble with the law?

I just found this...and almost didn't read it because I really don't like reading stories that were last updated in 2007. Most of the time they NEVER are updated. I'm glad I did, because I have read some Supernatural/Buffy Crossovers and this is the first I can remember that has the twist that you added...Dawn as Mary?? Awesome!!!! Just adore the way that Sam & Dean get all weirded out by Dawn and John's sexual references/innuendoes. I just wnat to know... will you please update this sometime??? and how about The Key, The dark-Hunter, and the Link? Are you going to update that anytime soon?? I know reall life gets in the way sometimes. Please update both of these soonest! Thanks!

This story is so much fun. I love watching Mary and John torture their sons with the sex talk. You show their characters so clearly: their strength and their flaws.

Great stuff, if you ever feel like adding more..... :0)

Oh! I love it! And you haven't updated in 9 months. Please say you remember this and add some more- its adorable and cute and oh so lovely. But yes, continue ASAP! WRITE NOW!

Good work! Glad she got to talk to Dean. Poor John having to deal with her. How much will Mary overide Dawn personality and memory wise?

I hope you will get inspired to continue this story.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

I like how Dawn and John are resettling into their relationship. Yeah for the demon being defeated and Wes worrying in the begining. Wonderful conversation between Dean and Dawn, and her points about how she understands what he's going through. It's nice how you bring in both Mary's background and Dawn's background to make her one person.

Dawn is Mary. I like that. I would also like to see how the Winchester men will handle meeting Dawn/Mary's "other" family (including vampires, slayers, watchers, and a Xander). :o) The Y.E.D. is bound to come back. Will they find some way to destroy him? I would love to read more. I hope the story is continued.

YOu know, I absolutely LOVE ALL of your Dawn fics! The Key..., House's Key..., and In my time. I love all three of these and each step farther into each story makes me love them that much more!!! I wish you would update again each of them soon because I just love them that much!!!

I've never thought much about this to characters or about Dawn's soul, but damn, you make it work! keep up the amazing job.

I loved this story from beginning to this current chapter and I am wondering when you will be posting again. Because I hope it's soon. I absolutely love the chemisty you've created between Dawn(Mary) and John. I love the interations between her and her sons as well. I also love the way her and John positively torture the boys with their total regard for each other. Like when you says to John she would only call him sir under certain circumstances. I would give anything to see the looks on both brother faces in that moment. More please and soon. Dieing to know what will happen next.

I came across this story while perusing the site. I never came across this pairing before - the Buffy/John thing being more the norm that I have read in the past.

I gotta say that it's really good...I mean really good. You were able to pull it off with the whole Mary thing, but still maintaining the whole Dawn aspect about it. Love it!

Just wondering if you're going to be updating this fic anytime soon or if it's on hiatus or abandoned? I hope not...I hope you're able to continue it.

wow...this story is so good....I hope you swrite more..I can't wait to see what else happens!

You know you have to update this story soon, because if you don't, people who are reading it will go insane, and you don't want that on your conscience.... Right?
It's a good story, and I love seeing Dawn making Sam and Dean do the ewwww faces. Keep it up