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Review of chapter "Part 18" from Amai
Review:
Where did Anita and Jamil go? Was it a set up? I didn't think Anita would be party to that?

I love the scene with Asher though, where you address the issue from his POV, and don't actually come out and say anything, but insert you're own version of how Buffy would react to his scars. The lack of words is actually more powerful.

Continue. Please?
Review By [Amai] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from wickedfire
Review:
damn good! Do continue this.
Review By [wickedfire] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from jackie
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I love these, please continue!!
Review By [jackie] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from Bunney
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hmm..this doesn't suck, but it definitly needs more. :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [22 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from soulfulone
Review:
OMG you're back to updating!!!! how the hell did i miss that???? oh so glad you came back to this fic, it is one of my favs.....and no one has been writing any B/A xovers worth reading for a couple of months (imho)....anyway, as i was reading the other reviews i hafta had my 2 cents: you called Richard a weenie...just be honest and call Dick, a dick (kinda goes with the name don't it?)....he doesn't deserve Buffy, especially not after the way he's treated her....he's so rigid (and not even in a good way) and inflexible....everything is so black and white, he needs to learn to find the gray (and btw, i AM a therapist) so my rx of treatment for Mr. Zeeman would be to learn from this experience and try to empathize, that for some, there are worse things than dying....and i'm sure he doesn't wanna know what its like living on as a survivor of rape, or worse.....anyway....im off my soap box...totally looking forward to more, and hopefully more often.........welcome back!
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [21 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 18" from SailorPikaAngel
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NO! Buffy don't fall for his salty goodness! Just beacuse he has more muscles now does not excuse his behavior! I want to go back to more Asher sexiness!! But I am feeling sympathy for Buffy.. but please let Buffy be stronger and let Richard suffer a little! There is too much going on right now! There are LOTS of issues that need to be dealt with..
Comments from author:
*G* Muscles are never a good excuse for bad behavior. They do, though, make bad behavior look good. Sort of?

There are lots of Richard issues to be dealt with. And, since I'm not a licensed therapist, I'm not sure I actually know how to help the poor idiot. Thanks for the feedback!
Review By [SailorPikaAngel] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from StephanieClare
Review:
Im so glad your updating again....I love this story. It is so well written, and the charatcers are really acurate. Im really looking forward to more of these little snipets of Buffy's life so please keep them coming.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying reading. I'll keep the snippets coming! *G*
Review By [StephanieClare] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from KnightOwl
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Buffy doesn't deserve the pain Richard has given her, and it shouldn't be easy for him to get her back. I can understand her kissing him because he is hot and she is definitely in love, but I hope he apologizes a lot. I also hope he doesn't do anything to hurt her like that again. Keep updating, please!
Comments from author:
Ugh. Richard is hot. He is kissable. He's also a weenie. He ought to apologize on his knees and be at her beck and call for life, but I doubt that'll happen.

Men can suck sometimes.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 18" from pezz
Review:
Awwwww! A sweet fluffy chapter with a dash of hotness. Can't wait for more:)
Comments from author:
Fluff can be fun! Like cotton candy! And circus rides. There's more to come soon. ;o)
Review By [pezz] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 18" from anouk
Review:
I'm so glad you're updating again. And I love the Buffy / Richard reunion :D In this crossover category it's my favorite pairing. Buffy seems to be somewhat of Anita Blake version lite ;) without the anger and accusations, which would be good for Richard.
Comments from author:
Anita Blake has some fun characteristics, but she can be a wee bit aggressive. A tad, but at least she's honest about it. I think Buffy comes across as a little less intense when it comes to dominating people, but also a little more passive aggressive.

Or, that's my take on it. I could be wrong.
Review By [anouk] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from SailorPikaAngel
Review:
wow.. there is some tension! are you sure this can't be a richard/buffy/asher fic? even though each chapter is so short.. you are able to condense alot of tension and drama into this! i hope to see more of asher!!! also with richard... i think it is a personal bias.. but he annoys me!! he is a walking contradiction and hurts those around him bcs he can't deal with his own issues... maybe buffy will be able to kick his ass into gear!
Comments from author:
R/B/A would be fun to read, but I don't think Richard could get over his homophobic/vampire issues to hop into bed with Buffy and Asher. Richard is such a spoilsport.

You're right, he does have a lot of issues and they do hurt his friends and family. There will be more Asher, though. Thanks for the feedback!
Review By [SailorPikaAngel] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 16" from pezz
Review:
I can't believe I'm just now finding this fic. It's brilliant! You have a good balance in your chapters...you give us just enough information to get a picture of what's going on but leave us dying for more. There are some great lines in this chapter as well. I particularly love Richards line: "He left her for reasons he can't remember but he's sure she'll never forget." I certainly hope Richard gets a clue in your fic. He never really seems to in the AB books. Can't wait for more:)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm working at making pictures. I'm trying for flashes of different character's perception of different moments. It's kinda fun.

I'm glad you liked Richard's line! I'd like him to get a clue, too. He's just so messed up, the poor dysfunctional werewolf. He needs an epiphany, the big oaf.
Review By [pezz] • Date [19 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 16" from (2007%20Donor)romero
Review:
Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Welcome. :o)
Review By [(2007%20Donor)romero] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (2007%20Donor)romero
Review:
I just found your stories at this site. I'm a happy camper.

It seems that Buffy is getting adjusted to this new dimension after a bumpy beginning (vast understatement). Richard..boy I'd like to give him a swift kick in the posterior if it would help him think straight. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you found my stories, too! Hope they keep you entertained.

**Richard..boy I'd like to give him a swift kick in the posterior if it would help him think straight. **

Yeah, he does need a good kick in the butt, the silly werewolf.
Review By [(2007%20Donor)romero] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from malenicks
Review:
Hey, thanks for continuing the story.
For a minute I thought... I better don't said it.( might come true)
Anyway, hope you continue writing, you left it on a really interesting part.

PS: Forget my desperate message from my last review.
Comments from author:
Hey! Thanks for the feedback. You are pretty wonderful. Hope the fic keeps you entertained! :o)
Review By [malenicks] • Date [23 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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