Awesome ending to an awesome story! I have to say, I liked the end. Definitely sad, but very fitting I think. I can't wait to read another story from you :)

I think it was a successful ending, though sad. It adds a level of realism to the story. Anyway, I liked it, but I noticed this major error:


“Avada Kadavra!”

“Protego!” Draco yelled, causing Buffy to spin around just as a jet of bright green light smashed into and invisible barrier directly in front of her face.


The killing curse (spelled Avada Kedavra) is only able to be blocked by physical objects, never magic. It wouldn't be such a horrible curse if people could just throw up a shield and avoid it.

Oh, huh. That makes sense, but I never really connected the dots. Thanks for letting me know. I probably won't change it cause it's not a really huge part of the chapter, but I'm glad you told me!

Well if that was really the ending, then I'm pleasantly surprised. I thought you would have had her end up with Harry in some great big happy ending. I'm glad you didn't, mostly because I'm not a Buffy/Harry shipper, but also because it wasn't something typical. Kudos to you for a great story.

Wow, I can't believe you killed off Harry! I really did think it was going to be Buffy. Great chapter even though you left us with a cliffy :( I really can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens in the aftermath. Keep up the good work and update soon :)

Wow, you really are moving this whole thing right along! Love the story still :)

I fell behind on this story so I've just reread everything form the beginning again. Absolutely superb! I can't believe you don't have a thousand reviews already. Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see how ticked Voldemort will be when he discovers that Buffy really was faking it all. Bet he'll be sooo mad. Two thumbs up ;)

GOD! I hate cliffhangers.

Other than that the chapter was great though.

Great story, you haven't updated in a while but I hope you will soon!

:) Sorry for reviewing so late! I was too busy to read up until now. Oh yay! Harry and Buffy! I love you! And the fic too, of course. :D Hmmm, lots of action going on, lovely! I hope it won't get angsty though, or I'll cry! *sniffs* Good job, good interaction between the characters, hope Draco and them get along better soon. It's war, people! Fire in the hole! ;P Update soon, mate!

I'm so glad you've updated. This is a really good story. I like the way the characters interact and their personalities.

This is one excellantly written story and I so like the interaction between the characters.
You have done both areas credit and I hope to read more of this story as you post updates. You have caught my attention and I really enjoy a good story such as yours.

Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter.

HellsingsDragon

Omg, I can't believe that I missed this update! Luckily I found it though... And soo glad that I did, this chapter was great. I love the whole story and can't wait to find out who you're pairing Buffy with. Although the whole thing with Voldemort is a little freaky, he sure is gonna be pissed when he finds out that she's been lying the whole time.
Anyway, update soon, please?!

LOL, that was awesome timing on the kiss. Gives you just the right kind of drama to kick this up an notch :) So are you gonna add a sirius spending time with buffy section to cause tension and doubt. I would. It works no matter who gets the girl in the end and it is fun to do stuff for the hell of it! :) So put the boy away and get back here I need to know what happens!!!!

Later and Love
Bunney

Great update! Can't wait to read more. Quick question, how did Buffy end up back at the Malfoy Manor after she got back to Hogwarts? Did Draco portkey her out or something? Please update soon! Keep up the good work :)

YAY!! I am sorry for being a lazy rabbit and not reading your great updates. They were great at moving this foerword!! I still say big giant heaps of EWWWWWWWWWWW!!! about moldie wart trying to get his groove on. I am also complete on the fence on whether i like harry or draco more...I think my vote is ....BOTH! Well i guess that would make it a little more graphic than you wanted to go...so maybe not...but how about a war for her attentions...than could be fun. So get back here and add more and I promise to go back to HP fic just for you :)

Later and Love
Bunney