Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
redjacobsonReview:
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this one yet! Excellent story, and, if I'm not mistaken, this is the result of the Time Jump (or is it a warp? It's just a jump to the left! *GRIN*) from "Don't Make Me Angry"? Speaking of which, you left us with a fairly nasty cliffhanger in that story, and I'm hoping your muse gives you the resolution to it in the near future.
red
Comments from author:
Yep, you're right about this being a follow-up to DMMA. ;-)
As far as the next chapter for that goes, I'm working on it but my muse isn't being real cooperative. ;-(
Review By [
redjacobson] • Date [21 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GundumMReview:
i really wished it had more back story, other then that it was good
Comments from author:
Actually, the back story is/will be supplied in 'Don't Make Me Angry -'
Review By [
GundumM] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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FyrecatReview:
...Interesting. There's a whole lot of missing back story here, but I'd definitely like to see the whole thong developed into a full story!
Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
thanks. You'll see some more of the back story in the next few chapters.
Review By [
Fyrecat] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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BrendanMReview:
Heee!
So this is where that other fic of yours is headed!
RE: Cyrix Chips
A man after my own heart.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Good to see you're enjoying the story. Just wait 'til you see what the Golden Quintet has in mind for the Hellmouth. ;-)
Review By [
BrendanM] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
neverwillReview:
Wow, I'm definitely looking forward to the story when you write it!
Comments from author:
Thanks. The first chapter of the follow-up story has been posted and it's called 'Don't Make Me Angry.'
Review By [
neverwill] • Date [18 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DragonhulkReview:
Okay, I'm completely confused by this.
I've read the reviews and comments you've left so I know that all will be explained in an upcoming story. Any chance of getting the title of the story so I know what to look for?
Comments from author:
Well, the first story in the series (there's going to be several relatively short ones covering different points in time) is tentatively called "Don't Make Me Angry" and I'm working on it right now, among others. Hopefully, you'll be seeing it in the near future.
Review By [
Dragonhulk] • Date [12 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ThunderGodReview:
weird..yet somehow strangely compelling..though if it does proceed I do wish for some changes..and most of all explanations:}
like why do that to Angel?....not that he shouldn't or doesn't deserve it...
ThunderGod
Comments from author:
Good. Weird was what was intended, because that world is majorly AU from both the Scooby-verse and the HP-verse.
You'll get some explanations when I post the first part of the first story I'm currently working on here. Hopefully, that will be in the very near future.
And Angel's fate will be explained in the course of the story.
Review By [
ThunderGod] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ScorpioReview:
*cackles with glee* Loved this! (especially Ron setting fire to Angel - couldn't have happened to a more deserving guy)
Of course now I'm left with a zillion questions.
Xand is a Potter how? And he obviously knows the "future" what with Buffy, Angel & the Mayor. Time-travel? Alt-dimensions? Anya been waving her wish powers around?
Ron is a Potter how? Is there a sister kickin' around or is this a slashy thing? (I'm good either way.)
Explain-y please? Perhaps in a follow-up where we see Buff & Xand's chat over coffee - or Hermione & Sabrina talking to Willow.
On a side note - Hermione is going to be *such* a good influence on Willow. She's proof that one doesn't have to be a timid anti-social spaz just because one has an IQ in the stratosphere.
More of this AU please. *big shiny eyes*
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. It was sparked by a plot bunny that simply wouldn't go away.
Yes, Xander is a Potter, but how he became one will be revealed in the story that I'm going to be writing once I finish up a few other minor things that are occupying my attention at the moment.
Ron is also a Potter, and no, he is not Harry's Significant Other. How this happened will also be explained in the same story that explains Xander's background.
And yes, Hermione will be an excellent influence on Willow, showing her that nerds can be beautiful and cool, too. ;-)
I'll be getting to this in the VERY near future, I promise. The plot bunny has been nibbling at my ankles incessantly since it showed up.
Review By [
Scorpio] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
mulligasReview:
You shouldn't have killed Angel. He was one of the good guys. Also, back when he was alive a sixteen year old girl would be of marriagable age. He is hardly a pedophile.
Comments from author:
Actually, in my opinion, for most of the first three seasons of Buffy, you could classify Angel as a good guy only by virtue of him not being an active bad guy (not counting the last half of Season Two that is).
He contributed virtually nothing in the first season except to act as a stalker and play mind games with a sixteen year old girl who already had serious emotional issues because of her Calling. And if you consider the dissension he caused among the Scoobies during his time with them, I really can't see how you can think of him as one of the good guys.
As far as girls commonly getting married at sixteen when he was alive, that is true, but that cannot, does not and should not justify his actions in our society today, in any way. Even if you consider him as being the age he was when he was turned, he was still at least ten years older than Buffy, and that is illegal at this time and in our society. And, if you should consider the time he was possessed by the soul, that adds an additional ninety years to his age, making his case even worse.
I know a lot of people consider him as one of the good guys, but I'm definitely not one of them. Once he left Sunnydale and moved to L.A., he changed significantly, and I'll agree that he might be considered as a hero in those circumstances. But not while he was in Sunnydale.
Review By [
mulligas] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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PrincessTaiReview:
Whoooakay! It was a nice story.
I didn't get the point. But was nice. I see MANY interesting possibilities if you consider continuing it.
And I wonder why are Xander, Harry, and Ron Potters?
Is it that Xand's Harry's cousin and Ron's his main man? :-D
Or is it a VERY hot threesome? That's the only logical solution, to me at least. And where does Sabrina fit into all this?
Comments from author:
Well, I can't say much right now, but I will say the whole name thing will be explained as soon as I can get to writing/expanding on this particular ficlet. And I don't think that you'll come anywhere near close to the correct explanation for why that happened.
Sabrina's presence and how she fits into the overall situation will also be explained then. I hope to start working on the expansion of this story in the very near future, as soon as I can pry some time loose from a fairly busy schedule.
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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dogbertcarrollReview:
That is a difficult mix to pull off.
Looks good.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your comments a great deal.
Review By [
dogbertcarroll] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DirectorLadyReview:
This is pretty awesome! I hope you're going to continue this and, perhaps, explain just how the heck they got here and why. Pleeeeease? With cheesecake and hot fudge sprinkles on top? Very cool premise though even if you don't continue it.
Comments from author:
First off, thanks for reviewing and commenting; it's much appreciated and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.
Second, yes, I will be expanding on this 'verse in the very near future, once I can find some time in my schedule to do so. The past few weeks have been very busy for me, and I'm hoping that things slow down enough to give me more time to write.
Review By [
DirectorLady] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
InfinixReview:
It's like getting a single bite of a pizza that you have never tried before. You're pretty sure you like it but not positive and you definitely want more. And pizza is pizza.
Comments from author:
Glad you found it interesting. Not to worry. I'll be starting work on this particular plot bunny once I get a little more time available to write.
I'm currently working two jobs and have a number of family commitments that are taking up a lot of my time, so time to write is scarce and I'm concentrating on getting the next chapter of Prophecies done.
Review By [
Infinix] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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SusanAnthonyReview:
Okay, very interesting! I can't wait to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope to be getting to working more on this in the very near future.
Review By [
SusanAnthony] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
BillieBogReview:
You really don't like Angel, and poor Xan gets completely rewritten. Well written, but not really my cup of tea.
Comments from author:
My dislike of the pedophile vampire is long standing, and I've never concealed it. I have five younger sisters and had a twenty-something tried to make a move on any of them when they were sixteen, I would definitely have had a long talk with him.
As far as rewriting Xander goes, once I have this plot bunny written out and you find out everything that happened to him and his friends prior to this ficlet, it will make perfect sense.
Review By [
BillieBog] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated