Review of chapter "Death of the Endless" from
AmaiReview:
Very interesting. I'm not familiar with a lot of these fandoms, but I liked them anyways. I don't read a lot of Halloween fics (cause they're often Zander centric and I'm a Buffy fanatic) but I liked that pieces (memories and powers) stayed behind after the night ended.
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Amai] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of the Endless" from
KyioReview:
I agree with everything said by CJNyfalt in addition I wonder what the Powers That Be's reaction to Buffy becoming an Endless would be?
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Kyio] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of the Endless" from
ValkyrieReview:
Neat.
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Valkyrie] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of the Endless" from
CJNyfaltReview:
Glad to see that you have an update, and interesting choice of character.
The problem for me with this choice is that there needs to be more hints on what will happen afterwards. Will there be a Buffy personality at all? Will she be slayer anymore? Will she leave Sunnydale to take on higher duties? There are too many questions open to allow me to Dream up a continuation.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the hints. I will try to revise this and answer some of your questions, but I suspect it will take a while. I don't have access to the comics right now, and I think I need it - for inspiration if nothing else.
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CJNyfalt] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of the Endless" from
amusewithaviewReview:
Puts a whole new spin on 'death is your gift'!
Danke
Comments from author:
You know, that didn't even occur to me when I was writing this.
Review By [
amusewithaview] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of the Endless" from
irialonsoReview:
First of all youve done a very good attempt of Death characterisation.
But Death would be much less serious and without doubt she would try a more carefree and sarcastic approach of the situation.
Hope this helps
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's been ages since I read any of the Sandman comics and I never did have a very good grasp on Death's character. However my muse wasn't going to let this one lie. I'll try to edit the story to be more accurate once I have access to the comics again.
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irialonso] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bariss Offee" from
CJNyfaltReview:
Interesting, has continuation potential.
BTW, from her profile on the official site:
http://www.starwars.com/databank/character/barrissoffee/it seems like she appeared in movie II.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the info. As for continuation... I think at the moment this is the one I'm most likely to continue, if any.
Review By [
CJNyfalt] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bariss Offee" from
GrindhallReview:
This is brilliant I would love to see anyone of these extended
Thanks for sharing
Review By [
Grindhall] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Susan Sto Helit" from
ValkyrieReview:
This one is really really good. I like it a lot.
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Valkyrie] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daimakaicho Hild" from
RamenthReview:
Once again, this is a truely awesome collection that I'd love to see extended; Especially Hild and Jolinar
Review By [
Ramenth] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Susan Sto Helit" from
ShieldageReview:
Pure genius :)
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "River Tam" from
acsReview:
Hmm... Xander going as the soldier, Buffy as River, and Willow as Inara?
Interesting idea.
Borrowing and turning this into a longer story... very tempting, though I would have thought Willow would be more likely to go as Kaylee. And how would someone have convinced Buffy to go as River?
Comments from author:
Feel free to borrow.
As for the choices of costumes - Buffy was determined to get Willow to dress out of character, thus Inara, and wasn't about to dress as Kaylee herself. Dungarees? No thanks. Besides, River is just a fun character to write.
Xander would have gone as one of the guys, but couldn't find/afford the props. Thus why the soldier reminds River of Mal.
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acs] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hyuuga Hinata" from
RamenthReview:
Ohhh. A lot of these have awesome follow up potential.
Thanks for the great read. :)
Review By [
Ramenth] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hyuuga Hinata" from
CJNyfaltReview:
LOL! The psychological changes caused by this would be interesting to read more about, and the byakugan is one of the best power-ups Buffy could get.
Glad to see that you have started writing again.
Review By [
CJNyfalt] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Susan Sto Helit" from
CJNyfaltReview:
A good one, works very well.
Review By [
CJNyfalt] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated