i really liked the premise of this story.
Were/are you planning on a sequal? or a new chapter? i would really love to see more of it.

Oh Dawn... never read a Dawn focused piece before and you did a really good job with this one. The epilogue/present day thing has me crazy intrigued but I won't ask for a sequel. *bits lip* I won't... promise.

I will be adding more to this I swear but the concept behind the sequel is taking a lot more research than I had anticipated. *shakes head* Of course I pick a plot that's interesting but also has a hundred different versions and that's just in the USA's adaptations of the Urban Legend.

comm on...thats not just and end...thats cliff hanger end.
But very interesting story.

Yes, you did warn us - but shame on you nonetheless! Most often, I don't even enjoy Dawn's character. But in this? You did a good job with this story, and you had something focused on Dawn that didn't cause me to hate her - a feat in and of itself. To make it better, you perfectly set things up for a Dean/Buffy pairing in addition to the Sam/Dawn... now if you would only follow through! Damn you and your multiple (fantastic) plot bunnies! You keep putting them out there and then leave us hanging! I want conclusions! I want focus!

*grins* But then I love each new addition. Yes, you're Evil.

Thanks for posting!

I'm trying to finish things! I swear it! But my muse sees a bright and shiny new plot bunny and becomes distracted chasing it. It's like she's a raccoon. If it sparkles she wants it. ;-)

Dawn annoyed me for her first two seasons but in the seven she was a lot more tolerable at least for me anyways. So I tend to only write Dawn after season 6 where I can let her be less whiny and more adult. Glad you liked it even though she was the focus!

Huh???? What the...? I'm confused! Please, please, please tell me that there is going to be a sequel that explains that last part!!!! Pretty, pretty please? Anyway, I so loved this and hope to see more of it!

Tsk tsk, always leaving us wanting more. It's simply cruel and unusual! Loved the interchange between Buffy and Dawn as well as Dean and Sam. Especially when Buffy lets Dawn borrow her shoes. So mundane and yet so very significant when it comes to Buffy. I adore your subtlety. More please.

Very interesting. I love that it was open-ended and I can only hope that you have the desire to continue with this. However, if you don't then I'll just have to leave the conclusion up to my own imagination.

Great job with all the voices in this piece. Dawn and Sam are so cute together.

It was a very enjoyable read. You do Buffy, even in small sections like this, so much justice. Thank you for not pulling any punches with her and keeping her true to form. Your Buffy is so in character that I look forward to reading her, especially when other authors never seem to do her justice.

*smooches*

My muse does like the cliffhanger part of this story and I found myself looking up the urban legends that back the theory. *ponders*

Aren't Dawn and Sam adorable? There's something about them that seems to vibe so well. Of course my muse is itching to write a Dawn/Dean just to see if I can. As for my Buffy. *beams* What can I say? When it came to Dawn she was a pain in the ass and she wasn't always the best at making good first impressions. I.E. Robin...she was more worried about having mom-hair then the fact that she was talking to the principal of the school Dawn was attending.

*hugs*

You are going to do a sequel right? Open-ended for an eventual sequel is fine, open ended and never getting an answer is just wrong.

The whole story had intriguing AU qualities. The fact Sam never told Dean about vampires once he knew they existed. One almost feels in your story Sam decided against Stanford.

I liked the cliffhanger.

You just liked the cliffhanger cause I might've off'ed Buffy. ;-)

As for the AU part, though it's tempting to have Sammy stay with the family I think loosing Jess is too big a cornerstone to in his life. Without it he'd be less emo...okay that might be reason enough to write it AU.

So, even if you warned us in the epilogue, you do realise that that cliffhanger is too monumentous, Mount Everest in a snowy day monumentous, to not have us clamouring for a seguel. How can we get anything done I ask you, if we are all hanging off the rock by our fingertips like this?

Well this probably won't be updated for a very, very long time since my muse likes Stargate again. So I suppose that means I should just delete that last section...darn and I like that little twist at the end. It'll probably dissappear sometime tomorrow. Thank you for taking the time to review and let me know that the cliffhanger was too much.

Wow, I really like this idea. I hope you do more.