Great story. I'm a big fan of Forever Knight, and you really don't see enough crossovers involving that universe, in my opinion. Also like how you're involving Tru. Your chapters are a bit short compared to what I'm used to, but at the same time you write them towards maximum effect and they keep the story going strong, which is actually a nice change of pace sometimes.

I know you're working on your whole Q thing these days, and while I like it too, it's quite convoluted. I know, the whole concept of the Q Continuum always was like that, so there's not much you can do about that, but... Just as a fan, I'd really love to see the sequel to this instead if you can make the time. - I plan to add it to my story tracking as soon as the first chapter comes out.

Thanks for taking the time to read this, and if you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of, let me know. Other than the television show I don't know much about Dresden, however I'm an avid Buffy and Forever Knight fan so I think I can keep up with most ideas considering those are the major stories involved so far.

I have enjoyed this very much and am looking forward to the next section.

Entertaining story, although it does jump a around a bit. I was amused by the way you were able to pull in the crossovers with the Scoobies' doubles--nice twist.

Please be aware your story rating is way off. The story should be rated FR-13 to FR-15, tops (see the heading "Rules" in the site navigation bar at the top of the page). The higher ratings are for graphic descriptions of violence/death/sex, not just the implication. It's good to be cautious on the ratings, but you are limiting your potential readership.

Good luck; I'm curious as to what the next story will bring.

Thanx. I took your advice and lowered it to FR15.
On the look alike thing. I figured why not. Throw in some funny and see where it goes.
I do have further plans for the Tru/Faith look alike scenario.

This story is brilliant. I can hardly wait to read the next in the series.

Thanx for the encouragement.

cool

Thanx for the continued support Bobboky :)

sweet

thanx...

Xander inviting someone in doesn't seem likely at all. He grew up in Sunnydale.

Magic user's Xander has run into by that point; Amy, Amy's mom, Giles, Jenny.

Don't buy the angst, but that may be cause you skipped the battle and whatever he was fighting so I'm just not feeling it.

Xander was ready to chop Amy's mother's head off when Buffy was hit with a blood curse and willing to kill Buffy when Willow was kidnapped. Not exactly a humans have rights that no other species does type of angsty guy. If it's a threat, kill it was his motto.

The new Xander doesn't fit the character at all and his sire wouldn't allow him to run off as it would mean the enforcers would come for her for violating the rules they live by.

Xander isn't surprised he can fly?

And why would she grab some random man off the street and vamp him? The Forever knight vamps differ from the Sunnydale ones in a lot of ways, one of which is being a lot more picky about bringing someone across.

Mortals aren't suppose to know about vamps in their setup. They have enforcers that remove either the memories or the person. She should be shocked that a human knows.

He folded pretty damn quickly against one measly vamp. No attempt at anything and he's tackled things a lot tougher then vamps. I think you'd need to at least use her little mental voodoo to make him fold.

That Xander is a cool one
He has a shot at tearing Angels arms off, but saving the day is more important than his fun

Can he smack Angel around after the girl is saved?

Yeah, he took the high road. Surprised me too. We'll have to see what happens next.

geat job. hope for another one soon.

Thanx for the review. I'll try to post soon. That seems to be a bit relative lately.

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This is a good one...please update as soon as you can...

I'll update soon. Promise. I've just been swamped at work.