Please tell me you plan on adding more to this. It's just to good not to finish.

More, please. Pretty please? It's been almost a years since the last chance you had to post to this story. Any chance of getting anymore chapters anytime soon? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

my favourite part was:
“Hey Jack, stop talking. It’s pathetic trying to wait for you to finish a sentence.” In true O’Neill style that translated to, ‘You don’t sound too good. You should save your strength.’
Jack sneered at the teen in front of him, and then settled back with a sigh. In O’Neill sign language this approximately meant, ‘I got what you really mean. Thank goodness.’ It was a subtle and complicated language with many layers which few people could understand.

you should really finish this story it is to good of an idea to go uncompleted.

Great story, great idea, poor Jack and Jon, great interactions, please continue with this story soon and don't let them not get on as they will need each other to talk to about stuff especially when they go to Sunnydale and there is no one else to talk to about the Stargate in person.

See, now this story? is just mean. You dangle an interesting fic in front of us poor readers, and it's unfinished! Just started even! :)

Interesting idea - I'll stay tuned!

Hi,
I was just re-reading Brown-Eyed Stray and ended up checking out all your other stuff as well, and loved it! You have great ideas and the skill to write the stories. I would really love to see updates in all or any of your stories. Do you have other stories up anywhere else? Thanks for sharing your writings, and happy new year!

Neqs

Very cute beginning! Please update soon!

Storm

lol, I love this idea. update please

okie dokie! New chappie coming soon!

More please. This is going to be interesting.

Love ya

Yay, you think it's interesting. It really is. *nods and agrees with self* I'm nearly done with the second chapter. Hope you'll like it!

eh *wiggles hand* not a bad start go in depth in to the bounding though scince this isn't a prior thing th "O'neill" language thing is hilarious though good job on that just be sure that you go through and thouch the years as they grow up

Yep, going to have some serious bonding time, just two of them so that the become "friendly/protective" twin bond thing, instead of barely-can-stand-each-other twins. Thanks for writing me back with the Asher info for the other story. For the life of me I couldn't remember which side it was. I was only right cause there's only two sides to choose from. LOL. Thanks for reading this story too!

Sounds like it is going to be fun! Thank God you left some A/N at the end to let us know that the boys wouldn't be staying 6 years old. ;)

Yeah, that could get old after a while. Or you might think that this would end up another fic about child/SG-1 person causing havoc on the base. Which this won't be. Next chapter, coming...when it comes. I'm so bad, but I'm going to update my other story first. Thanks for reviewing!

Brilliant :) I can't wait for the next chapter, please update again soon :)

*Singing* You like my story, you like my story! I'm so glad. Definitely plan on updating...sometime...after this....yeah.

This looks like to be the beginning of a VERY interesting story...I'm intrigued... Update soon! :-)

~ The Mormon Jedi

Ohh, intrigued is good. Reviewing is also good. I'm starting on the next chapter soon, promise.

Interesting story so far. I like the idea of two of them creating havoc all over the base. And I have this mental image of Janet putting the boys down for "nap time". Just please don't fall into the trap that some writers seem to, by thinking Original!Jack is stupid. The man has at least a masters degree and speaks at least three different languages. (The air force doesn't let idiots fly there multimillion dollar planes or go behind enemy lines to do covert ops.)

looking forward to seeing what comes next.

EXACTLY!! Jack O'Neill is totally not stupid, he just uses his smarts differently than Sam or Daniel! Sam uses her smarts by creating theories and Daniel spills his smarts all over the place (such a funny image). Jack concentrates his smarts on problem solving, and when it seems like he's being dumb it's like his version of a Xander act. He tries to cheer a group up, and deflect any emotional scenes. And I'm totally going to go into the whole smarts thing in the next chapter. So *Throwing a Scooby Snack* good job! So happy you said that, thanks!