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DragonelfReview:
Yay, a NEW chapter. :-D I hope we will see you inspired to write more chapters soon.
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Dragonelf] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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RichardthrnnsxReview:
Ok that gets a Wooaaah. More please
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Richardthrnnsx] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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RevDorothyLReview:
"Grandpa"? Oh my!
So glad you're continuing with this. I hope there'll be even more, someday!
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RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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slightlyeccentricReview:
Cliffhangers are evil! I really enjoyed this, I liked seeing Xander as the Commander, I can't wait to see how he and Fury react to each other.
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slightlyeccentric] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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LFWReview:
Been a while
Very glad to get to read more of this
and that 'grandpa' is a huge surprise
Looking forward to more
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LFW] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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JaredDrakeReview:
PAIN!!! LOTS AND LOTS OF PAIN!!! YOUR INNARDS WILL BE YOUR OUT-NARDS!!!
If you don't update soon.
I swear to god, that Nick Fury as Xander's grandpa caught me off-guard. Never seen that before - which is BRILLIANT!!!
Please update soon. Or I will find you, and kill you...
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JaredDrake] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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warReview:
Nick Fury?”
Silently she nodded. Xander’s eye lost focus and his jaw dropped open again. She barely heard the word that he whispered softly, “grandpa?...”
that's interesting news.
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
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war] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Ooooo...update soon please!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BumpkinReview:
"Grandpa?"
::blink:: ... ::blink::
Oh boy... :D!!!
Looking forward to the next part!
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
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Bumpkin] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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CaliadragonReview:
Oooo... This is so cool! Nick Fury was Xander's Grandpa? I really look forward to seeing what will happen next.
Thanks
Calia
Review By [
Caliadragon] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ThedruidReview:
Interesting start.
Review By [
Thedruid] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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LadyFoxFireReview:
Did not expect that! I hope you update soon so we can learn what is going on
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LadyFoxFire] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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JiltanithReview:
Oh, Yay! I've been wanting more of this for a long, long time!!
Please, don't make the wait for the next chapter so long!
Review By [
Jiltanith] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
Very intriguing.
Nicely written characters and an intriguing world.
Looking forward to more.
Thanks
Lee
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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grdReview:
Thank you for resuming this story. "grandpa"!!!?? Please continue this amazing story. Is SHIELD going to try to get Doc Strange to help find Nick?
Review By [
grd] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
